Her perfume was soft and hauntingly sweet[CTPWC]

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posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 08:38 PM
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I held her hand and felt a flutter
Lost in thought my knees felt like butter.
The day spent was too brisk and short.
Her perfume is soft and hauntingly sweet

I walked the rails to her house with inebriating
thoughts of her beauty and grace from the day before
I nervously knocked then she opened the door
Her perfume is soft and hauntingly sweet

The summer was filled with exploration and promises.
Time was short and a thief.
I danced with her and my two left feet.
Her perfume is soft and hauntingly sweet

I think back now being much older.
My hands shake from age as I
find the shoe box up in the corner.
Many now forgotten heart felt promises...


There they are.....

Hand made gifts....

With a hint of her perfume soft and
hauntingly sweet

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posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 08:41 PM
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Beautiful Slayer.

I'm really glad this contest is out, shows the lighter side of a lot of us.



posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 08:46 PM
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You made me wish I had been that Girl....Sweet Slayer....


Des



posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 08:53 PM
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I still have a hand made heart shape pillow with her hidden note inside and it still does have a hint of her perfume.



posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 11:10 PM
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This was the winning entry, so fresh, young, alive and honest. I followed with the pictures in my mind as your words entered my heart.



posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 11:10 PM
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Originally posted by tothetenthpower


Beautiful Slayer.

I'm really glad this contest is out, shows the lighter side of a lot of us.



Thank you kind sir.
I think we all have a lighter side even many choose not to show theirs.




posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 11:11 PM
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Originally posted by antar
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This was the winning entry, so fresh, young, alive and honest. I followed with the pictures in my mind as your words entered my heart.



I'm not so sure.

There are some really great contributions.

Looking forward to uhmm reading yours

HINT HINT



posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 11:15 PM
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Slayer,
You actually took me back to my teenage years and I thank you.
S&F
Quad



posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 11:20 PM
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This contest is certainly bringing out a side to people we seldom see

Another great job, SLAYER.


SnF



posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 11:36 PM
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Lovely, how every girl wants to be remembered

Even more special when we find we are....

And I hope she knows

you remember.



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 12:12 AM
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Originally posted by Quadrivium
Slayer,
You actually took me back to my teenage years and I thank you.
S&F
Quad



I was actually aiming for that point in time.
I'm glad others have those types of memories.



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 12:37 AM
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"Time was short and a thief."

Nice, and so true. Excellent imagery in this prose.



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 12:53 AM
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Thank you.



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 01:15 AM
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i would like to answer in kind with a little help from eric. about how i feel about a very special lady



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 01:59 AM
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This is really great Slayer..
Very beautiful & touching.
Honestly my favorite so far..



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 02:07 AM
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Loved that!!
Sensual is some kinda way...

Sooo, Yea...Whats with all the [CMWXYZ] short stories? I read a couple, this is the first one to spark my interest. Thanks Katharos
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posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 11:15 AM
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Absolutely beautiful, my friend. S&F



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 11:35 AM
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Wow Slayer.. You never cease to amaze me with your wonderful works! Poems seems to flow from you like the water coming down the mountain side. So natural, and easy on the eyes!
You have a real gift my friend, and Star and flag this too.
I thought your other submission was best, but I stand corrected.. I very much like this poem!



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 12:57 PM
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well shucks, now I have to change my stereotype of you. well done



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 10:59 PM
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She knows and there is more to the ongoing saga..........


BTW Great Avatar.





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