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posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 12:35 PM
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When

When it’s dark outside,
it's your light that guides my way.
When it’s cold inside,
I'm warmed with what you say.

When the hours are too long,
Your image passes my time.
When I'm all alone,
I still feel your hand in mine.

When sadness comes,
Your smile fills my heart.
When I feel sick,
it is only because we’re apart.

When all is gone,
You're still standing there.
When I’m with you,
I forget my fears.





edit on 1-11-2012 by isyeye because: (no reason given)




posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 06:23 PM
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Great prose, kinda made me on the inside. It brought feelings of remorse and hope together, but nailed the feeling of love.

Flagged. Good job.



posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 06:52 PM
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Originally posted by isyeye

When all is gone,
You're still standing there.
When I’m with you,
I forget my fears.


Favorite part.


S & F



posted on Nov, 2 2012 @ 05:32 AM
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Really enjoyed this poem, good write



posted on Nov, 3 2012 @ 08:39 PM
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Beautiful.



posted on Nov, 6 2012 @ 01:49 PM
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Good job!
Quad



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