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[CTPWC] That was it

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posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 12:08 PM
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They were zipping up the body bag in the Garden ...you had died.
I asked them to unzip and touched your shoulder and said see you Dad.

That was it

In another space somewhere not yet seen will we meet again?
That was it.. you died alone in your garden that was it.

Never another word between us father and son in so many ways alike.
You did your best and you died alone ..that was it.

Forever that was it.


edit on 1/11/12 by masqua because: minor title edit for contest entry




posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 12:11 PM
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Sad now.



posted on Nov, 1 2012 @ 07:09 PM
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It brought it into focus and very expressive.



 
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