posted on Nov, 3 2012 @ 09:34 AM
I need help.
I have always loved to write but I am new to poetry.
My last entry "What if She Would Have Said Yes" was only supposed to be for the comp.
I figured if I wrote about something that was close to my heart it would make a better poem.
Here is my problem.........
By the time I finished with it, I realized that this was about more than the contest.
I know it is not a great poem but to my mom and I it is our personal story.
As stated in the thread, here.... www.abovetopsecret.com...
I would like to give my mom this poem on my birthday in a couple of weeks.
It would mean the world to me if you could show me or point out punctuation or other problems in the poem.
If need be I will even withdraw it from the contest.
I just want it to be great when I give it to her.