Hey, not bad at all. Thanks for sharing this with us. It is a lot harder to write for children than one might think. I have taken plenty of creative writing classes and children's literature was one of the toughest for me!
I ask one question when scrutinizing a children's book. Does it show wonderment and imagination? You have passed my scrutiny! Dreams detectives is a
neat idea for children, definitely!
I have written a couple of children's books as well. One for more like beginning reader/ picture. And one for a bit older audience, but haven't
decided which age group to direct it toward. It could go in many directions. I haven't submitted any for publication though.
Keep on writing