Hey, not bad at all. Thanks for sharing this with us. It is a lot harder to write for children than one might think. I have taken plenty of creative writing classes and children's literature was one of the toughest for me!

I ask one question when scrutinizing a children's book. Does it show wonderment and imagination? You have passed my scrutiny! Dreams detectives is a neat idea for children, definitely!

I have written a couple of children's books as well. One for more like beginning reader/ picture. And one for a bit older audience, but haven't decided which age group to direct it toward. It could go in many directions. I haven't submitted any for publication though.

Keep on writing

Nice, what age range?

If someone's gonna say it, might as well be me:

THE CAKE IS A LIE!!!


Very cute story, S&F