Oath of Infinite Moment (Till the stars turn cold) [CTPWC}

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posted on Oct, 9 2012 @ 02:07 PM
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Till the stars turn cold

Until the heat has left this plane,
Until the last sane man goes insane,
Till the skies have collapsed upon our heads,
Till the lives of all flesh have fled,
Until the lead has become gold,
I will need you till the stars turn cold.

Until the universe goes from light to black,
Until the watchers turn their backs,
Till the vastness implodes once more,
Till all matter becomes crystal hoar,
Till entropy itself gets old,
I will need you till the stars turn cold.

No distance between us can sever,
Stretched to an infinite never,
No barrier erected before us,
Can ever deny us,
Like poles of magnets,
Across the void,
All between us will be destroyed,
A thousand forevers,
Upon them I vow,
I will need you in time,
As I need you now.
edit on 3/11/12 by masqua because: Title edited - request for contest entry approved




posted on Oct, 26 2012 @ 10:01 PM
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Really liked the poem! Very nice, Will keep looking for more.



posted on Nov, 16 2012 @ 03:15 PM
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I like it.
It shows great longing and emotion.
I hope you don't have to actually wait that long though.



posted on Nov, 20 2012 @ 01:32 PM
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Thanks , really appreciate your taking the time to respond to the poem 1loserel2. I dont know when I will next have the inspiration for something like this, but I will let you know.



posted on Nov, 20 2012 @ 01:33 PM
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This was written for a girl that I refer to as my "its complicated". With regard to wether I have to wait that long, its actually pretty likely that I will be waiting that long. Shes not really a one man woman, which is bloody unfortunate, since I would marry her tomorrow otherwise.



posted on Nov, 21 2012 @ 04:50 PM
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Awesome job and a good read


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