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posted on Sep, 29 2012 @ 02:57 PM
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For the dreams that died
For the tears you cried
For all of those lonely moments
Waiting in the dark
For all of those heartbeats which was only pain
Crying and crying for all to make sense

There will be a moment
For true love to wake
There will be an answer
For the deep need inside

Remember so deeply
So bright and so pure

This world may contain you
Yet you are so much more

This world may define you
Knowing not of your heart

Concepts
Will be sliding

Borders
Will be disappearing

Rules
Will be inwards turning

You are
Love undefined

You are
The answer to the call

You are
A spiritheart aligned

You are the freedom, the reason, the voice to be heard
You are emotion that moves beyond control

You are the morning
The song that always last

You are forever
A moment to be grasped




posted on Sep, 29 2012 @ 02:59 PM
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I like it, you should add music to this!



posted on Sep, 29 2012 @ 03:07 PM
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Originally posted by DavidEspinosa
I like it, you should add music to this!



Ah great idea... If you are musician you are welcome to go for it



posted on Sep, 29 2012 @ 03:10 PM
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i ain't musician but i can see this accompanied with flutes and drums!



posted on Sep, 29 2012 @ 03:13 PM
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A friend of mine actually put music on this one
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And I thought it was really cool, could always ask her
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Thanks



posted on Sep, 29 2012 @ 06:52 PM
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That was lovely, laffoe. Did you write it?

If you did, it was really good. Wonderful, hopeful words, an understanding of the depths of heartache in the dead of night, and the praise of the human spirit triumphing over the physical world.

The other posters said it should be set to music, because the words were lilting and musical.



posted on Sep, 29 2012 @ 07:29 PM
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Originally posted by FissionSurplus
That was lovely, laffoe. Did you write it?

If you did, it was really good. Wonderful, hopeful words, an understanding of the depths of heartache in the dead of night, and the praise of the human spirit triumphing over the physical world.

The other posters said it should be set to music, because the words were lilting and musical.


Thanks for being here and for your kind words



posted on Sep, 29 2012 @ 09:24 PM
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I sent it to my daughter, and she just loved it. I'm 50, she's 20, and we both got the same thing out of it.

You must favor us with more of your poetic offerings when you can!!



posted on Sep, 30 2012 @ 01:14 AM
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Originally posted by FissionSurplus
reply to post by laffoe
 


I sent it to my daughter, and she just loved it. I'm 50, she's 20, and we both got the same thing out of it.

You must favor us with more of your poetic offerings when you can!!


I surely will, my friend
Have posted 6 threads this night and most of it poetic in nature
Just the way my heart speaks I guess
It makes me very happy to hear, that both you and your daughter were touched by the words
It makes it all worth it, the hope is for people to remember
To love themselves, and meet other hearts from there
Remembering our true nature

From all the heart: thanks

Love and respect




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