CHECK My First Book Review!!!

page: 1
1

log in

join

posted on Aug, 22 2012 @ 03:49 AM
link   
Click Here To Read IT!


Its about this book called The Ian Saga: Deception Peak

I am very excited about this book review!

Who would have imagined that?! I hated doing book reviews in school hahaha'

Tell me what you all think!




posted on Aug, 22 2012 @ 06:27 AM
link   
reply to post by EvolEric
 


Looks good, nice work


Constructive criticism----
Saw the word wanna a few times, some will argue it is a word but either way it is Informal
Could use a read through for missing punctuation
"And The Ian's Realm Saga: Deception Peak is possibly the ****best I read**** yet."

Give a double-triple-quadruple check!!! But well done none the less, glad you enjoyed the book!



posted on Aug, 22 2012 @ 10:06 AM
link   
reply to post by Vicker
 


Thanks! I will revise it! My grammar skills suck!





new topics
 
1

log in

join