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posted on Aug, 18 2012 @ 01:04 PM
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In the meadow while I sit,
In the light a face I see,
Looking like you to me.

Have you truly come at last?

In the meadow while I sit,
The sun is getting low,
In dusky shadows
A form I see,
Looking like you to me.

Will you come and sit with me?

In the meadow while I sit,
The scented breezes blow,
I hear a voice like yours to me.

"I really have to go."




posted on Aug, 20 2012 @ 08:29 AM
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lovely



posted on Aug, 21 2012 @ 10:36 PM
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Contemplating the death of a loved one always makes me tear. SnF.

Good to see your entry. It made me think. I like flowing imagery such as you've presented.



posted on Aug, 22 2012 @ 12:12 PM
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Thanks


I hope this was appropriate for this contest.



posted on Aug, 22 2012 @ 12:14 PM
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Thanks!

I do appreciate feedback. Without some sort of feedback it is hard to know if anyone has even read a post.

Love this area of ATS.






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