"May I leave?"[APWC]

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posted on Aug, 10 2012 @ 01:46 AM
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"May I leave?"


I keep asking myself every day. I feel old, as If my very soul,
is bereft of the very possibility. I can sense the daylight, the air,
the known ability's, I possess.

This Journey, I have burnt into my psyche,feels.......right.
But the constant gnawing, and hunger to be free, posses me, like...

I don't know. There is no way to describe it. Instinct, Karma.
I have this dream of being something else.What I was, and what I am....

An enigma.

Oh... even those questions, cant break this feeling to be free. I must leave !



I MUST !


It is time..........













edit on 10-8-2012 by sonnny1 because: (no reason given)




posted on Aug, 10 2012 @ 02:05 AM
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reply to post by sonnny1
 


How the hell is this not flagged!?!?!!

S&F thank you!



posted on Aug, 10 2012 @ 02:17 AM
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reply to post by CompisMentis
 


Why thank you......for the kind words.



Its late, for most of the United States. Maybe the majority of writers, are sleeping comfortably.......


Hopefully, in the morning, They will get a chance to read it.


Peace.



posted on Aug, 10 2012 @ 06:59 PM
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got a sense of Claustrophobia reading then scrolled down to read replies and saw the pic, good job Sonny



posted on Aug, 10 2012 @ 07:29 PM
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reply to post by rebellender
 




My youngest daughter loved the story. She didnt know what it was about, until she saw the pic, actually.........

She loves butterflies, and started drawing them, and writing her own story, about them.




posted on Aug, 11 2012 @ 12:21 AM
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Just a lil' bump. Great story, I like to look at life from the perspective of other life forms



posted on Aug, 11 2012 @ 01:34 AM
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reply to post by Iamschist
 


Thank you for the bump.........



Actually, I didnt write this for the contest, per say....
Sheer Pleasure, of writing, and I was inspired by this Story.

The Lost Soul [APWC]

This story, has my vote, if I had one, for giving me the Inspiration.




posted on Aug, 12 2012 @ 06:13 PM
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reply to post by sonnny1
 


Wow, thank you for reading and enjoying my story. I'm glad it inspired you to write your own, which I enjoyed equally.



posted on Aug, 12 2012 @ 06:22 PM
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reply to post by DAZ21
 


You wrote yours superbly.

I honestly think yours should win this contest, actually.

Thank you for reading mine.......




posted on Aug, 13 2012 @ 11:44 PM
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"The Monarch Butterfly, a lordly thing,
so proud of flight, and fair of wing."

SnF. However brief, you nailed the essence of growing into a new stage of life.




posted on Aug, 18 2012 @ 12:29 PM
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reply to post by Druid42
 


Thank You Druid.




posted on Aug, 18 2012 @ 12:34 PM
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I found this to be charming.


I gave you a star and a flag.

Use them wisely



posted on Aug, 19 2012 @ 08:58 PM
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reply to post by SLAYER69
 




will do!

Thank You, BTW..





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