Poetry is Art too, page 1


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reply posted on 25-5-2012 @ 06:44 PM by Darkblade71
reply to post by obnoxiouschick



Great poem!


I believe poetry is art as well.
The soul expressing itself!
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reply posted on 25-5-2012 @ 07:41 PM by IEtherianSoul9
reply to post by obnoxiouschick



I love poetry (especially Hip Hop). Some people think rap is simply Retards Attempting Poetry, but that's a common misconception.

The water washes away my sorrow
In hope for a brighter tomorrow
Although time keeps slipping
With no minutes to borrow
I close my eyes and drift off
As I feel my feet begin to lift
My mind is filled with epiphanies
But what I'm looking for will remain a mystery...

Real no direction with this lol; just wrote it in under 5 mins.

edit on 5/25/2012 by IEtherianSoul9 because: (no reason given)



reply posted on 25-5-2012 @ 07:54 PM by obnoxiouschick
Originally posted by IEtherianSoul9
reply to
post by obnoxiouschick



I love poetry (especially Hip Hop). Some people think rap is simply Retards Attempting Poetry, but that's a common misconception.

The water washes away my sorrow
In hope for a brighter tomorrow
Although time keeps slipping
With no minutes to borrow
I close my eyes and drift off
As I feel my feet begin to lift
My mind is filled with epiphanies
But what I'm looking for will remain a mystery...

Real no direction with this lol; just wrote it in under 5 mins.

edit on 5/25/2012 by IEtherianSoul9 because: (no reason given)


I really like that.
Great style
and it flows very nicely.
But what beat would you put to it .....that was rap. I think rap is a form of poetry.


reply posted on 25-5-2012 @ 08:58 PM by obnoxiouschick
Originally posted by Darkblade71
reply to
post by obnoxiouschick



No, why?

2nd


ok then never mind it violated t/c

I like the doom porn
seems like a terse verse - I'm forgetting the actual terminology

I am just trying to get to 150 posts so I can use the chat function.


reply posted on 25-5-2012 @ 09:03 PM by Darkblade71
reply to post by obnoxiouschick





I keep forgetting this place even has a chatroom.
Pretty quiet whenever I go in there.
Always people, but no one talking threads.


reply posted on 25-5-2012 @ 10:47 PM by IEtherianSoul9
reply to post by obnoxiouschick



I never really thought about it lol, but probably this beat...




And they have a chat?! I never knew that!



reply posted on 26-5-2012 @ 12:37 AM by obnoxiouschick
reply to post by IEtherianSoul9



I like that
there's a thread on trance music you should add that.

yes it says chat right next to the tools tab but mine says I don't have enough posts to use it.


reply posted on 26-5-2012 @ 12:40 AM by obnoxiouschick
reply to post by Darkblade71



really that's sucks
I have to stir up some trouble in there

just kidding would never think of doing that


reply posted on 26-5-2012 @ 04:45 PM by obnoxiouschick
reply to post by Darkblade71



Now that I liked a lot.
Very profound
odd how things people write when they were younger ring true when they are older.
I had written mine when I was 17.
I guess I had too many guys break my heart.


reply posted on 26-5-2012 @ 09:34 PM by obnoxiouschick
reply to post by Darkblade71



I know too well the feeling of pain
I don't like it, it's like getting hit with a chain

I know too well the path of my tears
It's caused by the loneliness, a product of my fears
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