Poetry is Art too

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posted on May, 25 2012 @ 06:41 PM
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I know this is the art section but I didn't see a better place for this.

A heart is broken
a mind is shattered
Love was a token
nothing else mattered
Time flew away
and age caught up
It seemed like yesterday
I was still a young pup
Memories are lost
some I'll never find
But at what cost
did I lose my mind?




posted on May, 25 2012 @ 06:44 PM
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Great poem!


I believe poetry is art as well.
The soul expressing itself!
edit on 25-5-2012 by Darkblade71 because: (no reason given)



posted on May, 25 2012 @ 06:47 PM
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Yes thanks

can u tell I'm bored on a Fri sucks



posted on May, 25 2012 @ 07:41 PM
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I love poetry (especially Hip Hop). Some people think rap is simply Retards Attempting Poetry, but that's a common misconception.

The water washes away my sorrow
In hope for a brighter tomorrow
Although time keeps slipping
With no minutes to borrow
I close my eyes and drift off
As I feel my feet begin to lift
My mind is filled with epiphanies
But what I'm looking for will remain a mystery...

Real no direction with this lol; just wrote it in under 5 mins.

edit on 5/25/2012 by IEtherianSoul9 because: (no reason given)



posted on May, 25 2012 @ 07:42 PM
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Yeah, been a semi-boring day for me too,
I hear ya.



posted on May, 25 2012 @ 07:54 PM
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Originally posted by IEtherianSoul9
reply to post by obnoxiouschick
 


I love poetry (especially Hip Hop). Some people think rap is simply Retards Attempting Poetry, but that's a common misconception.

The water washes away my sorrow
In hope for a brighter tomorrow
Although time keeps slipping
With no minutes to borrow
I close my eyes and drift off
As I feel my feet begin to lift
My mind is filled with epiphanies
But what I'm looking for will remain a mystery...

Real no direction with this lol; just wrote it in under 5 mins.

edit on 5/25/2012 by IEtherianSoul9 because: (no reason given)


I really like that.
Great style
and it flows very nicely.
But what beat would you put to it .....that was rap. I think rap is a form of poetry.



posted on May, 25 2012 @ 08:35 PM
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----Doom Porn----


I'm sitting here staring at a screen,
pondering posts and what they mean.
I come across another thread,
Doom porn the title said.
I click the link and read the main post,
OH NOEEEES!!!
We're all gonna roast!





posted on May, 25 2012 @ 08:42 PM
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Originally posted by Darkblade71
----Doom Porn----


I'm sitting here staring at a screen,
pondering posts and what they mean.
I come across another thread,
Doom porn the title said.
I click the link and read the main post,
OH NOEEEES!!!
We're all gonna roast!




hey wait a minute
did you see my thread that got pulled?



posted on May, 25 2012 @ 08:50 PM
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No, why?

2nd



posted on May, 25 2012 @ 08:58 PM
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Originally posted by Darkblade71
reply to post by obnoxiouschick
 


No, why?

2nd


ok then never mind it violated t/c

I like the doom porn
seems like a terse verse - I'm forgetting the actual terminology

I am just trying to get to 150 posts so I can use the chat function.



posted on May, 25 2012 @ 09:03 PM
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I keep forgetting this place even has a chatroom.
Pretty quiet whenever I go in there.
Always people, but no one talking threads.



posted on May, 25 2012 @ 10:47 PM
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I never really thought about it lol, but probably this beat...




And they have a chat?! I never knew that!



posted on May, 26 2012 @ 12:37 AM
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I like that
there's a thread on trance music you should add that.

yes it says chat right next to the tools tab but mine says I don't have enough posts to use it.



posted on May, 26 2012 @ 12:40 AM
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really that's sucks
I have to stir up some trouble in there

just kidding would never think of doing that



posted on May, 26 2012 @ 12:47 AM
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You should.
Might liven things up in there



posted on May, 26 2012 @ 01:10 AM
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I'll take that as a dare

tomorrow



posted on May, 26 2012 @ 01:07 PM
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I wrote this poem back in the mid 90's.

My Awakening

I walked through the darkness without seeing any light.
A darkness so cold that I shivered with fright.
Wandering along a twisted path of greed,
not even knowing I had planted a seed.
My path wondered on seeming without an end.
I had no goals to reach and no love to send.
Then somehow the little seed took sprout,
And hard as I tried I couldn't pull it out.
The minute I touched this small soul grown seed,
It sparked with life and grew like a weed!
I saw the light this plant had brought,
And I realized that it was something I had been taught.
It was the tree of knowledge growing in my mind,
I remember how I once could be kind.
I turned and looked down my dark winding trail,
Realizing I had learned from my darkness,
The darkness changed to a lighter pale.
I looked ahead down my slightly brighter street,
And saw it pass other roads of people I would meet.
I would learn a little from each person I met,
Each intersection,
A person I could not forget.
Then the light began to shine from my still growing tree,
And I had the realization that the light was guiding me.
It had been with me all along in the dark!
but until I needed it,
It was only the seed,
From which came the
spark!



posted on May, 26 2012 @ 04:45 PM
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Now that I liked a lot.
Very profound
odd how things people write when they were younger ring true when they are older.
I had written mine when I was 17.
I guess I had too many guys break my heart.



posted on May, 26 2012 @ 09:11 PM
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Yeah, that happens.
Makes for good poetry though!



posted on May, 26 2012 @ 09:34 PM
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I know too well the feeling of pain
I don't like it, it's like getting hit with a chain

I know too well the path of my tears
It's caused by the loneliness, a product of my fears





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