posted on May, 17 2012 @ 09:37 AM
Your title is:
AP IMPACT: Evacs and drills pared near nuke plants,
Here's the problem....let's dissect it.
IMPACT = what the hell does this mean? AP? Associated Press?
= do you mean evacuations? I think so...or is this some other acronym I've never heard in this context....
= simulation drills, or actual drilling into the ground?
= what is he doing now? slicing fruit? does he mean "paired" instead?
plants = does he mean nuclear power plants, or nuclear weapons manufacturing plants?
All of this occurs in the readers mind in the milliseconds they take in scanning the title. So, with all of these, they simply keep going to a thread
title that makes sense.
Sorry, but you asked for the reason, I'm just giving it to you.
If you want a title change, U2U me, and I can edit it for you.
I know it's the title of the article, and not YOUR title, but that's why it is failing to capture interest.
A better one would be: Safety requirements being reduced at nuclear power plants?
That effectively communicates the jist of the thread.
edit on 17-5-2012 by Gazrok because: (no reason given)