posted on May, 11 2012 @ 02:36 PM
this 'story' is no where near complete, i'd love to hear some input
in 2021, 4 years after a global revolution wipes out the collective 'powers that be', a new more violent and oppressive, yet scientific government
has formed in the name of preventing future tyranny, established by Director Maddock Ardrara.
one such uses of the sciences was to hold government sanctioned projects where the 'real world' is a test facility within a mass of designed
projects, all working in cohesion to give an illusion.
(think truman show except EVERYONE is the show in some form of test or another)
one of these projects, codenamed 'ValeraSyx' is a simulated rebel cause believed to be fighting to end the occupation of minds, a noble endeavour to
cause change, but are under direct observation and study by the government's chief military Psychology scientist Dr. Cael Apquila. head of Labratory6
Installation; CodenameSyx which is tasked with studies of enemy military psychology by holding a live-subject simulation of a rebel cause within it's
the ValeraSyx headed by Antawn Valera will eventually become aware they are test subjects where fate will intervene allowing them a very brief escape
from the mind control they thought they were fighting to end and to see the truth and become able to cause the change they really felt. (or how I see
it ending possibly)
Valera Syx (where the simulated rebel cause gets its name) was a female rebel Commander in the initial uprising who led a small force into one of the
final battles of the war. Her determination was what inspired Director Ardrara to establish the ValeraSyx study among others to prevent her
personality type from leading future insurrections.
so far this story is all over the place, how about some constructive critisicms?
I don't know anyone in my day to day life who could help.