Sorry for the depressing tale but I just thught I'd try something different and put a bit of a twist on this months competition topic, as it would be (for better or worse lol) just be too easy for me to write about being the ruler of the world.
I thought I'd kee this one minimalistic just to add to the impact at the end. I don't expect anyone to actually like the story, nor did I
write it to attempt to win this comp. But what I'm more interested in is your opinions and criticisms of the way the story itself was written. More
to the point, was it effective in conveying the the obvious desired effect....
Cheers for reading - 1littlewolf