posted on Mar, 3 2012 @ 02:20 PM
reply to post by Donahue
I'm also a recording artist/song writer and this is what i would change/improve on:
1. Some of the lyrics. I'm not saying they're bad but i'm not convinced that you believe what you're singing. As a listener i want to think to
myself while i hear this "sh*t man he's right, livin aint easy."
2. More instruments. Now that you know how to record and mix make it ballsier.
3. No foot taps man. No offense but foot taps are a little cheesy, to me at least.
those are just a few things.