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2012 ATS Poem (FreeStyled)

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posted on Feb, 23 2012 @ 12:35 PM
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Hey i posted this when i first wrote/recorded this poem but it didn't get much attention and i want to see what people think and if any of you can catch the metaphors i threw in


and thanks in advanced for anyone willing to listen and throw in their 2 cents


edit on 23-2-2012 by WanderingThe3rd because: (no reason given)



posted on Feb, 23 2012 @ 01:03 PM
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Maybe it's cos I'm not American but I can barely understand a word going on here. Got some lyrics for the sonically challenged?
It sounds very well put together, nice sound quality etc but I just can't follow the words.

S n F for your creative effort though.



 
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