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A last gasp... Before all of man's faces hit the streets.. Listen...

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posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 09:49 PM
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Nah, do not listen...

this is the arm, the brightness of light,
that is induced by the space of time, and chemicals,
found by the Indians who found ways to twist time...


They will close the gates,
before the children of our lifetimes fate...
The breath will be whispered out at last,
from the dying mans black lungs two days from now,
and he will die,
and in a month he will be in a coffin hearing a record play at his wake,
where he will be eaten by mold... and of course worms..








Back to the static,
lets not tune into our dreams,
and lets leave those roads that lead to bright burning air,
to the chief's and Queens of the madmen...

As we look up to the sky,
we see nothing, and are to lazy to recognize the gravity that is there...

what a waste,
a bland mako of faces,
as we drivel within the spittle of the gods that left us here,
as the ignorant still think we are the best here...



We are so deaf,
we cannot even hear our hearts beat,
just the pulse of the cents that we think is fair...



Make a note..

Tommarrow, make time to look up at the closest star we call, the sun,
let it burn your eyes to remind you,
you are not the gods, but the fallacy...

Look up at that sun,
and let it remind you,

your nothing....

but you.... And me....
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now it is time to curse....

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posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 09:54 PM
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???



posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 09:57 PM
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Oh great silent one, welcome to ATS? If my face hits the street I'ma sayin ouch!



posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 09:57 PM
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Ahhhhhh beavis??!!!! ...... Hahahahaha

Lol im listening!!!!! And i hear it.

Pay attention!

I can make light of it, becaus i can!



posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 10:00 PM
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I wonder if your palm will hit you forehead when you realize what a complete failure your post is?



posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 10:03 PM
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Yes! tomarrow I will make time to look up at the closet star

edit on 12-2-2012 by grubblesnert because: phfft

edit on 12-2-2012 by grubblesnert because: double phfft


P.S. I just had to add how pathetic it is that I had to edit ONE sentence twice!

edit on 12-2-2012 by grubblesnert because: dreaded triple phffft



posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 10:11 PM
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reply to post by Runnn
 


Your post was blank at first, which was puzzling.
Now, it's full of, *cough* 'poetry.

Please, to be polite, I formally request that poetry be removed, and a proper introduction of "Hi. I'm that guy, or this guy, or some guy, or no guy at all ...".

Welcome to ATS.
Please try to restrain any temptation for obnoxiousness.


Probably, however, a more appropriate response would be:
Shaka when the walls fell






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posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 10:11 PM
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Originally posted by grubblesnert
Yes! tomarrow I will make time to look up at the closet star

edit on 12-2-2012 by grubblesnert because: phfft

edit on 12-2-2012 by grubblesnert because: double phfft


P.S. I just had to add how pathetic it is that I had to edit ONE sentence twice!

edit on 12-2-2012 by grubblesnert because: dreaded triple phffft


Lol at your P.S. It needs one more edit though. Maybe you can do it tomorrow

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posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 10:14 PM
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I found the men that satest upon the highest ideals of man... Yet I find them as before...

in high populous ideals,
within the temple, of an idea,
lost in the the whims of easy gold, and loose women,
the shadows left words from the shades that let themselves bleed onto the leaves of the evergreens....


I have found remus...





echo the same words I have heard over and over again...

now that we have met, try to remember how it all ends once again...


fools within the fallacy's



posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 10:17 PM
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come children feed on me once again....
it is your nature...



posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 10:24 PM
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Originally posted by scorpiosin

Originally posted by grubblesnert
Yes! tomarrow I will make time to look up at the closet star

edit on 12-2-2012 by grubblesnert because: phfft

edit on 12-2-2012 by grubblesnert because: double phfft


P.S. I just had to add how pathetic it is that I had to edit ONE sentence twice!

edit on 12-2-2012 by grubblesnert because: dreaded triple phffft


Lol at your P.S. It needs one more edit though. Maybe you can do it tomorrow

edit on 12-2-2012 by scorpiosin because: (no reason given)
when quoting the original poet I had to stay true to his form, ergo: tomarrow
,
anywhoo......thanks for your concern! Good to know I've got a friend!



posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 10:35 PM
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A concord of wind hit the side of my face it was brisk and crisp with a splint crack in my cheeks,
turning them blue with numbness as I could not feel the future for a few moments that were being sewn by our mothers....





I figured I would waste my time and introduce myself, here on ats,
then I am going to have to go..
Of course,
I am to rich to lay around and waste my ripeness here,
I have learned many seasons ago during many harvests before,
you idiots just gorge yourselves on such intellect, all during such time you also demise and try to comprise it, like idiots, because you did not think of it....





which will always keep ats at its same state...

It will never be a greece of knowledge of man, in the 21st century, or a rome, or anyting that has to do with any breakthru. that man will ever have...

EVER....

it will remain a circus act...

just look at the first hour of this thread...

enough said..



idiots..

I will write a lil more for those that are still listening, but my experiment is over...


I was right the first time...



posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 11:06 PM
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So enough was said, when the bread was made, within the beads of sweat from the brow,
yet is was still handed out to the children of venus,
the children who endowed the Callisto, without knowledge of the blood that was spilled, in order to allow such perversion constrict itself in the 21st century of man's dreams...

as I said I would check in..
Boy is man on ats in a poor state of affairs...

bathing in the the last bit of our fortunes twillight will leave us in a space close yet so afar...
We are now so lost, yet we say we are so close,
in a conundrum of chords sprung on instraments and sung by words familiar with choruses speaking to us on medicated slates of air... Yet the sky has been crying... We do not hear her voice, and we just point at her blood,,,

As we continue to look down or look at the women at our feet,
we miss the roots of our dreams, and wonder why they are dying from thirst!!!

And we wonder,, why we are getting hurt so bad, as our hearts skip beats...






I think I am about done wasting my intellect....

feed on me.... now..
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posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 11:27 PM
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Hello Runnn


The Introduction Forum is for introductions To tell something about you; not to start a thread about a topic.“Intro threads” that are really “topic threads” or in this case a Poetry page will be removed.
Welcome to ATS, it’s time to introduce yourself.


Closing the thread..




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