posted on Feb, 6 2012 @ 03:28 AM
i gonna give you an all out critique, dont hate me.
well written, its good youre not referring to a standard structure of songwriting.
with that being said, you need to spend a lot more time mixing the final product.
drums are played well but are too loud or too soft in parts, the bell from the cymbal need toning down, same goes for the guitar track.
when the heavy guitar kicks in everything sounds a bit too muddy, drums again are lost in the mix.
vocals are nice at the begining need work to bring them out to the front, and at the end the vocals are too loud.
sorry if this is too hash, as i said nice work, i wouldnt change anything except the mixing. and maybe the sound of the distorted guitar.
i understand its not easy mixing this music with so many different elements to it, i was in a heavy band for many years.
edit on 6-2-2012 by
jazzguy because: (no reason given)