Originally posted by lance_covel

Originally posted by HolgerTheDane

Originally posted by jaden_x
Sounds too Terranova inspired.
Cool story, but does't it take 2 stable time machines in two separate places in time to create a link?

No it doesn't require two stable time machines.

We actually do it using a Telekinetic system developed for the great war in 2345.

Actually the great war occurred from 2320-2343. The treaty was signed in 2344, and restructuring took place from mid 2344-2361.


I only added this to see what kind of input would be contributed. I love it when a group of people design a short story, it always seems to take the mind spinning!

edit on 3-2-2012 by lance_covel because: (no reason given)

If you are interested, we could start our own TT novel. The SuperMod for this forum is masqua, and he is super-flexible when starting a new Opera, there's a dragon one going on right now, but I'm more in the TT paradox mood now. I'd be willing to dedicate some time if others were as well.

(Note: An Opera is a new term denoting a group of forum members contributing to the same topic along a theme. It's basically a writing team that assembles, writes in concert, and the gestalt develops the theme to the story. Space Operas are the de-facto standard, but the genre has expanded to include all fictional elements of writing since then. Medieval scenarios are becoming more popular. IMO, a TT Opera would be twisted beyond belief, but if five people are interested, I'm sure masqua would help us out. Any takers?)

Time traveler, you should recheck the polarity of your neutron flow because in this orientation of the exceptional Lie Group E8 generating our UV bound multiverse domain, our sun lacks sufficient mass to go supernova.

Your temporal displacement may be correct, but you have arrived in the wrong condensed phase space of the multiverse.

WRONG UNIVERSE...DUDE!

Best of luck on your next try.

[Grabs coat and heads into TARDIS]

Great story. As I began writing mine, I noticed too many parrellels, so I scrapped it.


If the contest is based on flag count, then everyone else can pack there bags, because we got a winner!

Great short story!

Originally posted by lance_covel

Originally posted by HolgerTheDane

Originally posted by jaden_x
Sounds too Terranova inspired.
Cool story, but does't it take 2 stable time machines in two separate places in time to create a link?

No it doesn't require two stable time machines.

We actually do it using a Telekinetic system developed for the great war in 2345.

Actually the great war occurred from 2320-2343. The treaty was signed in 2344, and restructuring took place from mid 2344-2361.
***snip***

Yes you are partly right. Clearly you haven't been home for a while.

The treaty of 2344 was before Major Bloodnok went back to "tighten up a few threads". The treaty was not to everybodys liking (as you would know since the riots lasted for several years) and a few of us managed to sneak back and adjust a few events.

and our sun is about to supernova

Stopped reading there.

Our sun doesn't have the mass to go supernova.

not bad, a couple more pages with a story line making it more realistic would be good too. A billion years in the future isn't believable for internet..lol. Also "tachyon" field isn't either. To main stream. I would come up with some cool new words, maybe based on real physics and theory

I think your story was really good and i think you should consider working on a more lengthy full version and try to get published, you never know! Sci-fi has made a huge comeback in recent years and there's money in it to boot.

You seem yo be an aspiring writer as i am, if so good luck with that my friend and the ATS contest too,
flag for you!

I wouldn't say they ae time travelers, but they themselves have been here a very long time.

Actually, WE are the ancient aliens.

We came from elsewhere long time ago, Earth is a very new planet.

The human race is spread out all over the galaxies.