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When I Let You Go

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posted on Jan, 20 2012 @ 08:14 AM

When I let you go
Don't be offended
I let you go
Back to where you come from
Where I came from
Its been fun sharing temporary moments
But that fun, has come to an end
Its not you or I that has ended
Only the dream we pretended
No need to be offended
Cause our playtime
Was just that
A bubble full and empty
A way of sharing
A skin that can be shallow or deep.
A way of living in the temporary
Human heart beat.
Moments of sadness or confusion
A place full of illusion
Hhere we can come to meet
But at some point
We will let go.
Like ice and snow,
Of the whole show
Never can it repeat
Only once will we meet
Cause when I let you go
there will be nowhere else to go
No tapping feet
No thoughts
No winnings no defeat
No faces no hunger
Just being
How boring, how horrific
I hear you say
But if only you could
Live from inside the beat
You would know
There is much more to life
Than living, where blind eyes meet.
Why swim only knee deep.
Be daring,when the I let's go
The oceans roaring.
Enjoy the place from where life
Is always growing.
eliberocelta 2012 melbournese:
edit on 20/1/12 by masqua because: Replaced 'All Caps' in title and post

posted on Jan, 20 2012 @ 08:18 AM
Interesting post there mate. My first thought is what does this mean to you?

posted on Jan, 20 2012 @ 08:26 AM
reply to post by SageBeno
good question what does it mean to me? more than I could ever say!

posted on Jan, 20 2012 @ 08:40 AM
Awesome photograph!
Did you take it?

posted on Jan, 20 2012 @ 08:50 AM
reply to post by Silcone Synapse
No I didnt capture it, I thought it fitted the idea nicely, what a great job the guy did.

posted on Jan, 20 2012 @ 09:52 AM
reply to post by ancientthunder

Inrteresting thoughts, but could you please not post with the caps lock on?

posted on Jan, 20 2012 @ 09:55 AM
reply to post by masqua

done, sorry for that.

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