posted on Jan, 11 2012 @ 01:21 AM
thanks for the vid.
you seemed very different in this vid.
the entire way through it I was being critical not in a bad way but honest opinion. The new back drop is great but you seem to get lost within it. I
was hoping that it would zoom into the area of the world that you were talking about and it finally did prolly around 12 mins in.
I prefer your other vids (perhaps the changes were un-nerving?) You seemed more confident and delivered your opinion with that famous mouth of yours
in the other vids. You seemed quite vulnerable and at times the narrative was staggered, even coughing could have been edited out. That is the
first time you have come across vulnerable and I thought that a desk or even a stool that you could sit on may detract that. Lose the whole body and
just rely on the upper body (with a desk?) to maximise power. Are you reading the weather forecast? No...
The message was rushed, in the 15 minutes, I felt you put too much in it so that it was crammed. It is hard enough for the listener to get their head
around complicated names! I did notice towards the end you slowed your speech down a bit, took time to breath and that enabled emphasis of select
words and body language support.
It was too rushed and crammed with too much info.
I hope you take this as constructive criticism?
I am going to watch your last vid (Gaddafi?) to compare it.
anyway, with some refinement, your vids and style will be packed with a succinct punch.
all the best
one of the truth is viral vids
you were sitting down before and it really makes a difference...you were speaking slower also.
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