posted on Jan, 7 2012 @ 11:29 PM
I'm not a professional musician, but i've spent a lot of time in different bands, so I thought I'd give my opinion.
I see you have potential, but it would help to have a consistent bass line to tie all the different song samples together. Right now it sounds like
one song instantly transitioning into another. You can still have all the different samples you want if you treat them more like verses.(not exactly,
but that's what came to mind)
Personally, I really enjoy when songs, especially remixes, have a sort of "build up." This isn't the same genre and Idk if it'll get my point
across but at least listen to 0:40-0:51
Chasing the dragon- august burns red