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Originally posted by xMoralDeclinex
Not too shabby for a first attempt. The keys give it a cool and interesting vibe.
If I were to give some constructive criticism, I would say adding some variations to the drums would be the first thing that stands out. Perhaps some hi-hats and a few snare/tom fills here and there would round out the drum track a little more. Keep truckin'.
Originally posted by LightSpeedDriver
reply to post by lazernation
Wow, you made this on an iphone? Pretty amazing if you ask me but then I'm a musical computer noob. Anyway, it sounds very polished and well constructed and reminds me a little of the Tubular Bells intro part. Very cool, keep it up!
As for what to add, I have no idea, it sounds kinda complete to me as it is. Perhaps a nice electric guitar sound for a little ethereal solo work or picking out the melody in places? There are others here who will be better to help you with specifics.
Originally posted by VinnyPNY
great first song! i really liked the spacey feel that it gave off especially with the pictures used. Like said above the only constructive criticism i can give is to maybe add some more variation to the drums. I'm a drummer so i tend to focus on that not bad at all thought for a first time, keep it up