posted on Dec, 20 2011 @ 12:23 AM
I know it is just the first video, so please bear with me. I just wish to offer some constructive criticism, since you asked for opinions.
Most of the threads talked about were very good and important threads, but there are a few threads that I feel were a bit more important than some
picked. I.E the pepsi can thread. Were there not more relevant threads than that to recap?
I watch this video... and...well... It just reminds me of something I would see on MTV. The way it looks just does not seem to be aimed at the proper
demographic. It looks like a video made for teenagers. But that could just be me.
Also, I have no personal problem with this guy cussing However,( And this is a big however ) because this is an ATS production, I think
professionalism needs to be considered. I see no reason for him to cuss. Also because it is an ATS production, I do think you should be holding
yourself to the same rules that the members are held to... So, I say leave out the cussing...
Last, the guy was a bit mono-tone and it is obvious he is reading a script( Obvious to me), but it is his first video, so I think that will go away as
he gets more used to what he is doing. That is not to say he should stick to the script. It is just too obvious that there is a script involved. This
is more a critique on his vocals coming across as a bit unnatural.
Anyway, I have been on and around television production ( both sides of the camera , so to speak) and those are my bits of constructive criticism. You
asked for our opinions, so don't beat me up too badly
edit on 20-12-2011 by gimme_some_truth because: (no reason given)