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posted on Dec, 19 2011 @ 03:31 AM
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I heard you're dying
don't believe everything you hear
fit, alive, healthy




posted on Dec, 25 2011 @ 02:09 AM
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happy holidays!
beautiful weather today
good food, good people



posted on Dec, 25 2011 @ 02:16 AM
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Too Much Benadryl
Want To Fall Asleep Fast Now
Cat Likes Makeup And To Meow



posted on Dec, 25 2011 @ 02:20 AM
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reply to post by ThrowCatsAtCacti
 


Thrown Into Cactus
Smile Remains On Face Despite
Because Of Makeup



posted on Dec, 25 2011 @ 09:16 AM
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The Great Powedered Doughnut Blimps fly low
across the great Crystal floating seas
be aware of the Jelly discharge



posted on Dec, 31 2011 @ 09:44 PM
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twenty twelve today
recovering, nye
mellow day for sure



posted on Jan, 1 2012 @ 06:48 AM
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Note:

Unless serious attempts at haiku are created, this thread is ultimately bound for the Chit Chat forum.



The bright new day dawns
Yet birds hold their welcome song
Over snowy fields



posted on Jan, 1 2012 @ 07:07 AM
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reply to post by ThoughtForms
 


New Year's Promise
Hopeful dawn or
Descending darkness and ice?

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New Year cracks the dawn
Light and LIfe breaking or
Black Snow and Ice smothering?

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Newness of Time Dawns
Resurrection Springs anew.
The Cross behind
Tangible Heaven ahead.



posted on Jan, 1 2012 @ 09:25 PM
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Originally posted by masqua
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Unless serious attempts at haiku are created, this thread is ultimately bound for the Chit Chat forum.



um.. excuse me?

who dictates what qualifies as 'serious'. didn't you notice in the op the part where I mention its ok to post haiku that aren't strictly haiku or does it not count? and why so long to make an objection or demand?

also, please point to the deluge of non-haiku posting members... I see only one member doing that and as the thread author I have no problem with his posts whatsoever, they are charming in their own way...

heres a thought... maybe english isn't his first language?? maybe his haiku are translated from his native tongue resulting in the poor formation once posted as english... had you considered that?

I don't know what you were hoping to achieve with your post but I disagree completely with your decision that this thread would ever *need* to be moved to another forum...

the poetry you choose to contribute is welcome... other stuff not so much...

btw I'm aware that I have no choice in that matter but be damned if I won't voice my objections.

-TF
edit on 1-1-2012 by ThoughtForms because: decorum. middle of a heatwave here. temper is tested.



posted on Jan, 1 2012 @ 10:12 PM
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reply to post by ThoughtForms
 


[I find your spirit and attitude refreshingly encouraging. YEA! THX THX]

Therefore . . .

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Quakes N Shakes
Changes sudden and stark
Ice fractures; bubbles up life.

Double Bubble Toil & Trouble.
Planet rattles, rocks & rolls.
Spring thaw--or over the cliff?

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Darkening clouds
Flood the horizon of the soul
Azlan roars. Light breaks through.

Dark Darkens.
Light Lightens.
Choose fiery ice . . . or Life.

Trek the tortured wind down . . . . [rhymes with hind, bind]
Deeper into Gollum's hole.
No ring. An empty tomb--forever spring .


The Old Order deepens
Spreading the black, fiery plague.
New labels = not newness nor spring.

The weak choose comfort
and fleeting pleasure.
The ant's store lasts the winter.

Beauty called ugly;
Black called white;
Deadly cold now called life.

Hope in delusions
Trashes life.
Hope in LIfe
Enlivens the cold & dead.

A Thankful Heart
Is open to Spring;
Will feel Summer's Sonshine.



posted on Jan, 1 2012 @ 11:15 PM
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a t s childish
use red pens not blue pencil!
does not change a thing.

-TF



posted on Jan, 1 2012 @ 11:19 PM
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Originally posted by BO XIAN
reply to post by ThoughtForms
 


[I find your spirit and attitude refreshingly encouraging. YEA! THX THX]

Therefore . . .
thank you




Darkening clouds
Flood the horizon of the soul
Azlan roars. Light breaks through.

the lion the witch and the wardrobe




Trek the tortured wind down . . . . [rhymes with hind, bind]
Deeper into Gollum's hole.
No ring. An empty tomb--forever spring .


and lord of the rings too


what a wonderful post you made and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your other poems, they are beautiful thoughts.

Thankyou.

Peace,
-TF



posted on Jan, 1 2012 @ 11:23 PM
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reply to post by masqua
 


I see... so I call you out for an explanation of just what it is that so offended you about the posts in this thread and how it was ill fitting for the short stories area....and you just move it anyway. I also find it amusing how you clearly just come across some thread thats been going for some time now and decide to meddle with it because you don't like it...



have fun experiencing whatever 'feelings' and 'thoughts' drove you to make that decision... I'm just glad to be unburdened by such desires myself.

Peace,
-TF
edit on 1-1-2012 by ThoughtForms because: (no reason given)



posted on Jan, 2 2012 @ 08:35 AM
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reply to post by ThoughtForms
 


Complexity whirls
a summer tornado.
Understanding blesses the heart.

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Long are the tunnels
Thru Mount Doom.
Insightful kindness liberates.

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Tortured chaos
Challenges even Tall Oaks.
A smile warms the heart
And strengthens resolve.

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Faithful Hobbits trek on.
Gnats & crows harrass.
Understanding compassion strengthens.

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Kindness waters the throat
In a dry & weary desert.
Gratitude enlarges the heart.

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The Old Earth races to Doom,
Fetid humans oblivious.
Treebeard & Gandalf sigh.

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A raging fire
erupts from hell.
The ignorant thoughtlessly
warm their hands
Seconds before the blast.

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Stupidity = enlightenment.
Black ice = spring flowers.
Evil is dressed in splendor.
Truth is trashed as "hate."

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A loving heart
Summers the darkest corners.
Hope flowers the eyes.

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Wisdom twinkles in secret.
The clueless stumble on.
The alert are at peace.

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Clueless thoughtlessness
Spreads as suffocating mold.
Bright Sonlight will death it.

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Deception Dances in Darkness
Pretending to be light.
Truth pierces winter's ice.

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Chaos & Destruction
Waltz in the New Order.
Enroute to eternal winter.

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Particularly even more encouragingly to the OPer:
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Piss-ants challenge elephants.
The elephants go swimming--
Enjoying the summer sun.

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Ignorance exalts in itself.
Unaware that Wisdom
waltzes by in serenity.

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Some wear power
Like a foolish hat;
Unaware the hat is on their rear.

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You have encouraged
a beleagured soul.
May spring eternal
Thrill your heart & week.



posted on Jan, 4 2012 @ 02:21 AM
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we all drop likes flies,
buzz left & right then we die...
immolate in flight.
edit on 4-1-2012 by ThoughtForms because: (no reason given)



posted on Jan, 4 2012 @ 02:26 AM
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reply to post by BO XIAN
 


lol you are a smart and beautiful soul. your ability to comment on situations through poetry and reach through to peoples core is astounding. you have a gift.

-TF



posted on Feb, 1 2012 @ 05:22 AM
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whose the man from wales?
he moved to australia..
just to shoot the breeze...



posted on Feb, 12 2012 @ 01:27 AM
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no one post haiku
I'll be so mad if you do..
like a footless shoe...




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