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reply posted on 21-12-2011 @ 10:36 PM by luxordelphi
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OP: it's a sad story when a child wishes for death. Not that a child would know what they were doing; just that those questions shouldn't even enter a childs' mind. To want to be somewhere else in happier times and not to really know what that somewhere else means is understandable. Still I wish it could have been different.



reply posted on 21-12-2011 @ 11:11 PM by CherubBaby
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You are correct Luxordephi. I added some fiction in this poem but the little girl was talked about by Mother and Grand Mother when I was a little boy, From what I can remember she would say she wanted to be with her real Mom and Dad and she was found deceased in bed one morning. I feel as a writer it's ok to push the enveloupe in a harmless way at times.Thank you for your words and Merry Christmas to you forever
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