posted on Dec, 9 2011 @ 01:36 AM
reply to post by MidnightSunshine
yes I think so. I write a bit like that but most of the time, it does not rhyme oh time and rhyme = rhyme
I wrote the 'I want' thread and it does not rhyme. I am pretty sure you can frame any creative writing anyway you want. That is a difficult task
especially as it is hard to put in 'emphasis' in the written word but writing that rhymes tends to act as a stop or pause.
I like what you have written. It is short and sweet. I try to write to suit what I like and your style is definitely in my like category.
Long sentences, long paragraphs and single spacing can be a struggle to read.
Either way, I liked what you have written and I am sure that it would be in the genre of Poetry.