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[D&G] Lonely Lucifer

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posted on Nov, 4 2011 @ 02:18 AM
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This is a story I wrote last year but only one other person has ever read.

Please enjoy.....

....I really want writer status





Lonely Lucifer



Look.

Yesss, and listen…

So alone.

He iss…yessss…

Every effort made nothing real enough to hold.
And no one came close, to being anything at all.....


.....Like him,
Sso alone he isss…

Yessss he will make a fine candidate…



(I)



Exhaustion torn apart by an uncontainable energy
He storms frenetically through blackberry & rose bush,
Through the intertwined mess of burnt and jagged branches
Reaching out to tear his flesh.

Bloody,
Winded,
Gasping for breath,
Hands on the back of his head,
Lungs open to take in more air,
Being careful not to bump the wound,
That used to be the top of his ear;
Or any of the other cuts,
Slices & chunks missing from his body.

When his eyes stopped flashing like a strobe light,
And he could hear the crickets chirping over the sound,
Of his own heart slamming in his chest,
He looked around.

He had made his way to the top of a hill,
But upon reaching he felt drained and weak,
Exhausted he lay down & closed his eyes.
Quietly…
Patiently…
waiting to die.

He could not bear the effort of anything else.

In his mind he leaves his body.
His sight returns.
Looking up & around at his surrounding,
Reaching with his soul, for anyone…
any…

thing…

The many stars and planets of the sky began to move and rearrange…
Words crept into his ears carried through the cosmos on a wisp of ether,
A face of great magnitude formed from the cosmos in front of his eyes;
Grinning a sinister jagged deathbed, its teeth the size of galaxies.

And the face spoke to him.

(II)


“Son, you are Lucifer reborn.
Yours is the wrath that will destroy us all.
You are the final test on which all humanity will be judged.
Your revenge on the universal consciousness will be swift, just and glorious.

Upon reaching the afterlife, your consciousness will devour itself, your humanity replaced by an all powerful hatred, burning deep inside what once was a soul, fuelling your infinite existence.

The form in which you embody will be the collective cause of universal pain & despair,
Manifest into a living nightmare.

A tsunami of death,
Its crest a vicious bitter anarchy,
Its trough an endless tunnel of misery,
An all consuming shadow, a mutated earth in its wake,
With every step, you will shatter reality, cracks will emanate,
And from out the depths of each and every footprint,
A new hell will be born.

Voices will cry an agony that bursts through young hearts,
Last breaths ripping through chests like a carving knife,
Souls escaping the physical world, through pores like poison gas.
Dying like animals, you will end us all.”

...
..
.

But the man was not Lucifer,
and the voice was not god,
So the man’s brain exploded
and got lost in the fog.


(III)



Ew…er…fail?

Yes, we failed. Let’s not dwell on-

FAILEEEEED!!!! Ew…massster…not to meat…

Yesssss to meat….let’sss NOT dwell..

Ssss….musssst try harder nek’sssssst, time…..

Yesss….



(IV)

And if ye be frail minded and just pooped out a log,
It wasn’t me who typed this, ‘twas our dear Mr. Magog!


edit on 4-11-2011 by ThoughtForms because: EPIC GUITAR SOLO!!!!!



posted on Nov, 4 2011 @ 02:30 AM
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I can haz you read plz?

I'm quoting lolcatz here so you know I'm getting desperate


-TF



posted on Nov, 4 2011 @ 02:35 AM
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Quite enjoyable... thanks.



posted on Nov, 4 2011 @ 02:40 AM
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thanking you good sir or madam.

-TF




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