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Poetry

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posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 12:53 AM
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This is a poem I wrote a little while ago, just some thoughts of mine spilled upon a page.

windows made of obsidian
do not show me the work of such hideous sons
I was not meant to walk this earth
commited to empty space
it has more to give than open arms
succumbing to disillusion
my brothers have drown in a sea of misfortune
granted them by false friends
for this is the disguise of many a foe...



No the word "sons" is not a typo.




posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 12:54 AM
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posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 12:56 AM
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I just figured there may be some literature lovers on here that might enjoy it.

Thanks for the reply.



posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 01:12 AM
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Well some of us DO love literature, and I also happen to think that you have a VERY good poem on your hands here, have you ever looked into getting published? If not, I recommend you do.



posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 01:34 AM
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Actually yes, I have two books ready to be published I'm just waiting until I can get the money to self publish through IUniverse. It can get a bit pricey.

Thank You. I appreciate your response.



posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 02:20 AM
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Well I wish you all the luck in the world with your pursuits, you definitely deserve to be read, feel free to post more at any time, you will always get a star from me my friend.



posted on Aug, 31 2011 @ 02:49 AM
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Thank you, I figured this was as good a place as any to post a few thought provoking passages.

Are you a writer as well?



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