Among the living (poem)

Among the living:


I cannot yet put words on paper
that describe what I want to say.
Emotions are so random, still
not held together by my thoughts.
One day,
I'll write you a beautiful poem,
when my heart lives again...
and I learned to 'feel' once more...

In recent nights, when I reached out,
and shared a handful of tears,
a sudden peace came over me,
telling me that you know it all.
Now you know it all:
the silly little things I crave for,
the truth behind my truth.

You whispered...

The importance of living
among the living.

~~~~~~
to my brother
15-02-1979 - 16-06-2007

Is this poem about mental disorder?

Originally posted by Nomzy
Is this poem about mental disorder?

no it isn't about mental disorder,

I wrote this during the turbulent times I went through after my brother died.
I guess it's about greeving and acceptance... with a spiritual touch

reply to post by GypsK


Well it's a beautiful poem. The lyrics mean something different to me., something that fits perfectly into my life. Thanks for this.

Also, sorry for your loss.

reply to post by Nomzy


for me,
if it means 'something' to One person,
that's a task completed

thank you
and your welcome!