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posted on Jul, 3 2011 @ 12:39 AM
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If you remove the fruit from the tree the monkey becomes disinterested.
If you remove the intellectual debate the intellectual becomes disinterested.
If you remove the mind, the attention grabbers cant meet you.
If you remove the excessive wiggling tongue, the gossipers become bored of you
If you devalue the power of logic over you, its power is lost over you.
If you devalue the thought the clear mind can spread through you.
If you devalue the you in you and not increase the others in you.
The natural feeling of oneness arises in you.
In fact if the you is lost, the true youness is revealed just as it is.
Without you.
eliberocelta july 2011
edit on 3-7-2011 by ancientthunder because: spell error




posted on Jul, 3 2011 @ 12:59 AM
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Sick poem, you wrote this yourself? Makes a lot of sense.



posted on Jul, 3 2011 @ 01:07 AM
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You held me breathless for a moment there.
Do you recall the Beatle's " Within you and without you "?



posted on Jul, 3 2011 @ 01:11 AM
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i thought this was going to be about U2.....




posted on Jul, 3 2011 @ 01:13 AM
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yes It was written through me, I dont mind your sick part in fact it made me laugh. What did you mean tho?





posted on Jul, 3 2011 @ 01:18 AM
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yes as the title came to me I realized it was U2 who popularised it, perhaps they were pointing in that direction also. Also the beatles have had an influence in me at times. It a bit like the old one " to be you or not to be you this is the question my friend"





posted on Jul, 3 2011 @ 10:31 AM
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Originally posted by ancientthunder
If you remove the fruit from the tree the monkey becomes disinterested.
If you remove the intellectual debate the intellectual becomes disinterested.
If you remove the mind, the attention grabbers cant meet you.
If you remove the excessive wiggling tongue, the gossipers become bored of you
If you devalue the power of logic over you, its power is lost over you.
If you devalue the thought the clear mind can spread through you.
If you devalue the you in you and not increase the others in you.
The natural feeling of oneness arises in you.
In fact if the you is lost, the true youness is revealed just as it is.
Without you.
eliberocelta july 2011
edit on 3-7-2011 by ancientthunder because: spell error


What do you mean "not increase the others in you?"



posted on Jul, 3 2011 @ 11:17 AM
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Originally posted by ancientthunder
If you remove the fruit from the tree the monkey becomes disinterested.
If you remove the intellectual debate the intellectual becomes disinterested.
If you remove the mind, the attention grabbers cant meet you.
If you remove the excessive wiggling tongue, the gossipers become bored of you
If you devalue the power of logic over you, its power is lost over you.
If you devalue the thought the clear mind can spread through you.
If you devalue the you in you and not increase the others in you.
The natural feeling of oneness arises in you.
In fact if the you is lost, the true youness is revealed just as it is.
Without you.
eliberocelta july 2011
edit on 3-7-2011 by ancientthunder because: spell error


Absolutely beautiful my friend.

With Love,

Your Brother



posted on Jul, 3 2011 @ 11:19 AM
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Originally posted by smithjustinb

Originally posted by ancientthunder
If you remove the fruit from the tree the monkey becomes disinterested.
If you remove the intellectual debate the intellectual becomes disinterested.
If you remove the mind, the attention grabbers cant meet you.
If you remove the excessive wiggling tongue, the gossipers become bored of you
If you devalue the power of logic over you, its power is lost over you.
If you devalue the thought the clear mind can spread through you.
If you devalue the you in you and not increase the others in you.
The natural feeling of oneness arises in you.
In fact if the you is lost, the true youness is revealed just as it is.
Without you.
eliberocelta july 2011
edit on 3-7-2011 by ancientthunder because: spell error


What do you mean "not increase the others in you?"

he means collective consciensness
the humans scientists know as a fact animals have it
they only denie the fact humans have it too
we are all one
connected through the source



posted on Jul, 3 2011 @ 11:55 AM
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Originally posted by yets777

Originally posted by smithjustinb

Originally posted by ancientthunder
If you remove the fruit from the tree the monkey becomes disinterested.
If you remove the intellectual debate the intellectual becomes disinterested.
If you remove the mind, the attention grabbers cant meet you.
If you remove the excessive wiggling tongue, the gossipers become bored of you
If you devalue the power of logic over you, its power is lost over you.
If you devalue the thought the clear mind can spread through you.
If you devalue the you in you and not increase the others in you.
The natural feeling of oneness arises in you.
In fact if the you is lost, the true youness is revealed just as it is.
Without you.
eliberocelta july 2011
edit on 3-7-2011 by ancientthunder because: spell error


What do you mean "not increase the others in you?"

he means collective consciensness
the humans scientists know as a fact animals have it
they only denie the fact humans have it too
we are all one
connected through the source


I know we're all one. But this still doesn't answer my question.



posted on Jul, 4 2011 @ 04:32 AM
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Ah that’s a good question; I will answer it in this way. Imagine your mind as a blackboard with no chalk marks, and then the you in you starts chalking the blackboard. The poem looks at how we only see the chalk marks that we create ourselves, but the bit that you asked about. Sometimes, what happens to some people is that although they quieten their own noise, we allow others to chalk up our blackboard also. This is done by a variety of methods sometimes by over socializing, by being over sensitive to others needs, listening to music, study ,etc etc. We are suddenly flooded by others concerns and this too defeats the purpose. I hope that was of some help.




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