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the neverending poem

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posted on Aug, 8 2004 @ 08:42 PM
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I'm posting here because you're commiting literary first degree murder.

You're butchering everything a poem is and turning it into an *oh so noble* group effort to share feelings.

Oh, and as far as i know, this forum is for Prose, not Poetry.

P.S. Not all poems rhyme




posted on Aug, 8 2004 @ 09:14 PM
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here is recap of the first page.

perhaps i was in love with the darkside
something in my childhood that made my heart die.
Maybe I was a part of a system
And within my soul got no reply
just wait until the end of time
when i can fly
I canít help these thoughts,
That filter through my mind.
even when i die
ill always be alive
Cruising through the universe
I'll rise above the mortal curse.
You sold me your soul, when you didn't say no
Just let a nigga go, and give me what you owe
give me freedom
i feel like im locked up on death row
your Apathy killed my soul,
Since you left me i never felt whole
freemason needs to set a new goal
to stop being the boards biggest troll
I can catch you in the very building that you live in
Wait until you get right at your door then start spittin
rounds from my mac 10
on the ground clutchin your stomach beggin for me to let you keep livin
Go ahead and shoot you cretin goon
I'd rather die than take mercy from you
retalliation is a must
if you want compensation.
my only fear of death is reincarnation, heart of a soldier
with the brain to teach a whole nation
I feel lost, like the almighty forgotten soldier,
still waiting for my eternal salvation,
But you don't hear me, ignorance is blisning and so on
Sometimes it's better to be taught dumb
Deep inside my broken soul i feel so numb,
Life has taken its toll and its hard to breathe







congrats guys




posted on Aug, 25 2004 @ 02:02 AM
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Your Golden Boy lies tarnished and broken
Yet very nearly free
A tribute to your honesty
Of things that will always remain unspoken.



posted on Sep, 21 2004 @ 06:55 PM
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I would contribute, but I don't listen to Rap.

Unfortunatly, I can't steal their lyrics like some members seems to of done in this thread



posted on Dec, 5 2004 @ 07:37 PM
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This is a test of the willing in the time of need.




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