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Teardrops In The Rain ( My Poem)

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posted on Jun, 4 2011 @ 09:14 AM
Stolen kisses, and broken promises,
Are these the things dreams are made of?

Plea's of the heart echo in unbroken silence,
Mocked by the reality of Love.

Is it a wonder I live in a dream world,
No one sees my tears, hidden away is my pain.

Love like Crystal often shatters,
Lost like teardrops in the rain.

posted on Jun, 4 2011 @ 09:44 AM
reply to post by bloodnoir

That is a beautiful poem. I love poetry very much, as you must surely do. You express your heart well. Wish I could read more.

Yes, what you wrote about Love,

"between the idea and the reality falls the shadow"! T.S Eliot "The Hollow Men" poem.

Seems like our hearts are so trapped because, for all the good and noble intent, we never can quite gain the realisation in this life. The central theme of all Romantic Poetry.

Keep on being you, for your words tell me the spark is there in your Soul!
edit on 4-6-2011 by Revolution9 because: spelling

posted on Jun, 4 2011 @ 10:26 AM
reply to post by Revolution9

Thank you for your kind words. They are like sunshine for this exposed soul.

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