A poem of my depression, Part II

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posted on May, 1 2011 @ 05:58 AM
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The world is an asylum
safe barriers paint the external
hidden dwellings within
routines
schemes
spoiled dreams
the promise lies broke
but you are my medicine
afflicted by your decadence
addicted to your essence
blessed with a full moon
on every number




posted on May, 1 2011 @ 07:17 AM
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I enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing.

For some reason it is always easier for me to write poetry when I am depressed or sad or broken-hearted.

I hope writing this made you feel better.



posted on May, 1 2011 @ 07:18 AM
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posted on May, 1 2011 @ 12:17 PM
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I'm the same way. Thank you for taking the time to read it.



posted on May, 1 2011 @ 02:03 PM
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Me too... I hate it when I'm depressed. But I do my best writing then. Thanks for sharing.

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posted on Jun, 8 2011 @ 03:33 AM
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RUMI Love Dogs read by Coleman Barks

www.youtube.com...



Inside Water
www.youtube.com...

Who speaks words with my mouth
www.youtube.com...


There are lots of great Rumi poems read by Coleman barks, its hard to choose just one.
edit on 8-6-2011 by maya27 because: added more links





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