Shortest horror story ever! Seriously!

There was a factory where everyone in the world worked at the same time. A fire started and everybodies teeth exploded into their brain and they died.

Sorry if this is stupid but I just wanted to make a short horror story.

Originally posted by kid_cudi
There was a factory where everyone in the world worked at the same time. A fire started and everybodies teeth exploded into their brain and they died.

Sorry if this is stupid but I just wanted to make a short horror story.

edit on 28-3-2011 by kid_cudi because: (no reason given)

Hah, I found a logical hole in your story. What about those with dentures or no teeth at all?

Originally posted by kid_cudi
There was a factory where everyone in the world worked at the same time. A fire started and everybodies teeth exploded into their brain and they died.

Sorry if this is stupid but I just wanted to make a short horror story.

edit on 28-3-2011 by kid_cudi because: (no reason given)

I can't wait to see the replies on this one...


Deebo

Originally posted by chr0naut

Originally posted by kid_cudi
There was a factory where everyone in the world worked at the same time. A fire started and everybodies teeth exploded into their brain and they died.

Sorry if this is stupid but I just wanted to make a short horror story.

edit on 28-3-2011 by kid_cudi because: (no reason given)

Hah, I found a logical hole in your story. What about those with dentures or no teeth at all?

That leaves it open for a sequel.

reply to post by chr0naut


Or those with titanium plates? No tooth can go through that!

I liked the part, where, at the factory, their teeth explode into their brain and they die.

Can't wait for the movie.....

Originally posted by kid_cudi
There was a factory where everyone in the world worked at the same time. A fire started and everybodies teeth exploded into their brain and they died.

Sorry if this is stupid but I just wanted to make a short horror story.

edit on 28-3-2011 by kid_cudi because: (no reason given)

Who started the fire and did they survive? Surely they would have taken precaution against their teeth exploding along with everyone else's. Is the whole world dead or did some people have the day off?

reply to post by don rumsfeld


Maybe in the sequel they will die of shock for having to pay $1.25 for a pack of .25 nabs out of the evil vending machines...

And no. Nobody is allowed to bring in outside food.

Look everyone... when Smokey warned us about the dangers of forest fires... HE WASN'T SCREWING AROUND!

And the moral of the story was...."Now remember kids...crack kills!"

This deserves an oscar.

Originally posted by TheCardigan
This deserves an oscar.

Yes but the fifth sequel will have different actors and will be just ho-hum.

reply to post by bigern


Jimmy Hoffa started the fire..

The rest of the questions depend on whether the factory was actually unionized or if the negotiations were still ongoing.

reply to post by kid_cudi


That was actually a really good story. I imagined it stretched out into 5-10 paragraphs. I think this should go under micro-stories

Hahahaha thanks for the hilarious replies everybody. I guess I have to make a sequel to this one so here it goes. And yes people with no teeth... Their gums exploded. People with titanium teeth... All their teeth exploded too. It's a horror story so anything and everything can happen.

In the factory where the whole world worked at the same time a man was welding some metal units. A spark went into his shirt pocket and ignited his lighter. He threw the grinder out of his hands and cut open a gas line and the sparks ignited and caused an explosion and everyones teeth exploded into their brains and they all died. No one had a day off. Everyone was at work. Teeth exploded into their brain and they died.

Originally posted by kid_cudi
There was a factory where everyone in the world worked at the same time.

This is the most scary line in the story.

Probably having teeth exploding into the brain and die is a good ending in this scenario.

reply to post by Caslina84


Haha that's very true!

Second

That's one heck of a way to get a day off.

But....but...WAIT A MINUTE...


in almost every story, even the scary ones...there's always one person who saves the day!!

reply to post by AZsunshine


Oh you mean the guy who escaped the factory and got In his car but a piece of shrapnel flew into his face and his teeth exploded and he died. yeah he didn't save the day. No one did.