you guessed it right , this is another poetry thread .
i have been writing poems for a while now .
What we all need to understand is that poems are just as unique as a person (him/her)self .
Self -Expression is very important to discover the essence of one's being .
Remember , poems written just for the sake for rhyming are not the best of the poems .
Let the emotions flow ,dare to be bold
Let your subconscious creative side take hold
My poem : Perished Soul
Once in a dream
in a thoughtful stream
i heard a silent scream
Bewildered was I
Due , to the subconscious cry
Melting with me
Entirety of my being
Everything , seen , unseen
Just destroyed by a peculiar cry
Once I was awake
scattered and dismissed
To see my world destroyed
i was nothing but overjoyed
The dream did end
God , he did send
An angel to collect my perished soul
I woke in the nether realm
Forced to be q slave of truth
Enslaved by my own reality
Serving the purpose of the ONE
and only GOD .
I do not believe in a personal God . All through the poem I have used figurative language and terms .
If you are aware of The Law of attraction or new age cultism , you will easily understand the meaning of the poem .
The poem is also a Rant on the status quo .
edit on 7/2/11 by renegade17 because: Poem input *
edit on 7/2/11 by renegade17
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