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Baby Your No good!

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posted on Jan, 20 2011 @ 03:12 AM
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I AM NO GOOD! This is my life,
I have tried for many, and never no reward.
I am helpless and lonely,
and have no bounds.
I wonder where next, I will be found.

My triumphs have been, far and few,
and Ive always known that I will never add up quite like you.
I thought It would be like a movie, and Id get a "cue".

Love is a chance, far, and few.
I added my points, and tallied my score.
Now with loneliness I try no more.

I am original and yes quite like me few.
I never thought Id love you.

Now I changed my bet, and to no avail.
I think this time, maybe I failed.

You and I had nothing, nothing at all,
Now I know I had, nothing at all.

I cannot blame love at all,
As I have had nothing to this,
Now I think there was something I missed.

Now I am here with a space to be filled,
If you were a free dinner, Yes, Id be billed.

Maybe someday, I will see true,
But till then.. I still LOVE you.

Peace, NRE.





edit on 20/1/11 by masqua because: Removed [WRAP] from title until there are 300 words




posted on Jan, 20 2011 @ 03:23 AM
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I want to apologize in advance if this wasn't the point of [WRAP]. If it has to be moved so be it.

Peace, NRE.



posted on Jan, 20 2011 @ 07:04 AM
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reply to post by NoRegretsEver
 


i think the [WRAP] contest rules have been pretty open to interpretation, I've read all the entries and yours is no less worthy, more than that, it was a beautiful & (I thought) heartfelt poem which I really enjoyed


thankyou for sharing S+F

P.L.U.R.I
-B.M



posted on Jan, 20 2011 @ 08:39 AM
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The only rule that your poem does not meet is the minimum word count. As it is, there are 192 and you need to boost it up to 300.

www.wordcounttool.com...

I can edit in whatever you'd like to add as well as put the [WRAP] back on the title.


edit on 20/1/11 by masqua because: (no reason given)




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