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reply posted on 16-1-2011 @ 10:13 AM by havok
reply to post by Cameoii


Awesome!

*S&F*

I definitely had to read it twice to understand it.
But I love the premise and think it was extremely clever.
Almost like a logic problem...

Great job.
One of my favorite reads in a while.





reply posted on 19-1-2011 @ 06:39 AM by B.Morrison
reply to post by Cameoii


that was quite a funny & clever story I enjoyed reading it
S+F

-B.M
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reply posted on 19-1-2011 @ 03:03 PM by sonjah1
reply to post by Cameoii


Brilliant!

Reminds me of something back in 2009 that really had me amped up (Level 6)

I still think you have all of the qualities of a pro. writer & I hope you win!


reply posted on 19-1-2011 @ 04:57 PM by Cameoii
reply to post by sonjah1


Thanks! Lvl 6 had me SO amped up it was causing problems with the other aspects of my life. It even affected my health from lack of rest and stress levels!!
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