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posted on Jul, 4 2004 @ 06:26 PM
Hope its ok to post this hear and if not, feel free to move it mods alrite

These where inspired by two wondefull people. a peom for each 1 it they are (they aint got names)

1. the trees brustle in the wind, the streams come slowly down the moutains. blowing so smoothly and the water so gently like the voice and touch of you. the sun rises up in the north and shines on all the terrain. like your love filling the earth just like grass fills the land. you smile upon me...and i gladly take ur hand holding tight like a wizard holds his wand. the warmth of your unique features heats the villages and keeps us warm. when the night falls my spirit still remains high as i'm lovingly and openly blessed with you in my life

2. as valuable as the sun is to the earth, as important as gravity is to keep our feet firmly on the ground to prevent us believing we're living in a dream apon the heavans. your words are as clear as the blue sky and a touch so gentle that not even the finest of glass would shatter. as delicate and sweet as the final chocolate, yet unearthed like so many of the greatest treasures you remain safe in our hearts

Hope you like


posted on Jul, 4 2004 @ 06:29 PM

Wow there great!! you have a real talent there,
Very well wrote!


posted on Jul, 4 2004 @ 06:33 PM

aww asala said...very well written

see...u have confidence...any more it and i will be more than happy to help hun ok


posted on Jul, 4 2004 @ 06:41 PM
Thanks Asala, Gryff for your kinds words. yer, i was encouraged to share lol and if i get any more done up it would be a pleasure to put them up here.

If any1 got ideas for improvement etc it would be great to hear


posted on Jul, 4 2004 @ 07:41 PM
Wow, I liked them. Nice word choice, and description. I write alot of poetry myself.

posted on Jul, 4 2004 @ 08:36 PM
Ok, time for guess the poem. This one is fairly easy, here goes...

Seven Blackbirds sitting in a Tree
Count them and see what they be

1 for sorrow
2 for joy
3 for a girl
4 for a boy
5 for silver
6 for gold
7 for a story
that's never been told

posted on Jul, 4 2004 @ 08:55 PM
Favorite poets anyone?

Read alot of Charles Bukowski a while back, pretty interesting stuff. Check him out:

Also really like Tim Burton's Melancholly Death Of Oysterboy.

posted on Aug, 16 2004 @ 02:57 AM
A little pixy poem

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