posted on Sep, 17 2010 @ 09:16 AM
Wow. good story! I had the chills there for a second.
I also am *trying* to write a story for this contest, But its not going so well. lol.Hopefully i can get it all together and make it sound 1/2 as
good as this one!
I really think yours is good and deserves to place out of the entries so far.