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posted on Sep, 17 2010 @ 07:50 AM
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Thank you Ldy! I dig the new avatar too! Didn't see an entry from you... did I miss it? Off to search the page for it.




posted on Sep, 17 2010 @ 08:09 AM
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I liked it. a bit scary hope u win the contest.



posted on Sep, 17 2010 @ 08:28 AM
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reply to post by christinaV
 


Thank you Christina! I am so happy you enjoyed it.



posted on Sep, 17 2010 @ 09:16 AM
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Wow. good story! I had the chills there for a second.
I also am *trying* to write a story for this contest, But its not going so well. lol.Hopefully i can get it all together and make it sound 1/2 as good as this one!
I really think yours is good and deserves to place out of the entries so far.



posted on Sep, 17 2010 @ 09:18 AM
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Thank you so much! I truly appreciate that.

I look forward to reading your entry. Get it in quick! Ends soon! Good luck to you!



posted on Oct, 3 2010 @ 09:07 PM
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Just getting around to enjoying some of the short stories tonight, perfect really, just like your story. had me a bit scared for a bit...



posted on Oct, 4 2010 @ 05:03 PM
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reply to post by antar
 


Thank you Antar! I am glad you enjoyed it.



posted on Oct, 6 2010 @ 06:48 AM
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Scary story!



posted on Oct, 6 2010 @ 11:55 AM
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very good write
enjoyed it immensely
such talent within



posted on Oct, 7 2010 @ 12:46 AM
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reply to post by Salenai
 


I hope you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading.



posted on Oct, 7 2010 @ 12:47 AM
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reply to post by boondock-saint
 


Thank you so much Boondock! I truly appreciate that!



posted on Oct, 24 2010 @ 05:24 PM
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That image of the hooded figures really gives me the chills. You've written one very spooky story - the kind I like best. Thanks for submitting it.



posted on Oct, 25 2010 @ 10:39 AM
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reply to post by Flatwoods
 


Thank you so much for reading and commenting. So happy it touched something in you and that you apparently enjoyed it. That made my day!



posted on Oct, 29 2010 @ 06:49 PM
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Looks like yet another writer will be giving me a run for my money...


Compared to some of these stories, yours definitely included, my story seems... inadequate.

Way to make me feel inadequate



posted on Oct, 30 2010 @ 03:24 AM
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I just read yours and I disagree. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying this!



posted on Oct, 30 2010 @ 07:57 AM
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reply to post by Ceriddwen
 


It's a good story for a rainy night like this. I have to admit I got a chill that wouldn't go away throughout the last paragraph (I did peek out my window)
SnF for you



posted on Oct, 30 2010 @ 01:15 PM
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Thank you so much Tribble! I am glad you enjoyed it!



posted on Oct, 30 2010 @ 08:53 PM
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Thanks for the story.

Thoroughly enjoyed it.

Had me riveted all the way.

I think it might be good idea for ATS to publish a book of stories written by people on the site.

The standard of everything I've read so far is really high in my opinion.

Might have a go myself at some point..........



posted on Oct, 31 2010 @ 10:07 AM
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reply to post by Illegal Alien
 


Thank you so much Illegal! I truly appreciate it.



posted on Oct, 31 2010 @ 06:49 PM
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reply to post by Ceriddwen
 


Thanks. Good one - kept me reading to find out what happened!

S&F





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