This is nothing short of pure brilliance! absolutely excellent, I have just sat for 4 minutes completely riveted to the spot watching intently each
strip. Complete and utter genius. Well done ATS finally something worth shouting from the rooftops.
that was really kind of sweet. enjoyed it all, particularly the innovative art. loved antichrist obama's horns the most though. i like how they
emerge out of his forehead, rather than the top of his head.
the main dude looks like the guy from quiet riot's stuff, no?
so i assume there's going to be story/plot at some point, right … not just ats advertisement?
think the speed is good. would much rather be able to pause when i need to, than be forced to wait … and wait.
Looks like they the ATS folks took my advice and pursued this comic venture...
One thing I would like is perhaps animated "comic scenes" nothing major, like capes blowing in the wind, or a flag waving, or smoke rising in the
distance. But still a snapshot, a scene in each panel, still a comic.
Perhaps even porting it to a FLASH format where folks can easily interactively click to go to new panels, etc and read at their own pace.
A good subtle soundtrack may work well to convey the scenes.
Originally posted by Asktheanimals
Good stuff. Nice drawing work in there as well. Not exactly a surprise ending but I digress.
Thank you very much! I admit, the ending was no shocker, but I wanted to use the first issue as an introduction to the main character and the reason
for the comic to exist. So, I can say there will be more attention to content and story flow as the series progresses, unfortunately I am limited by
my talent, so I can only do as good as I can.
I'm very lucky right now to have ATS behind me and in my corner backing me up with advice, computer skills years of knowledge that I don't have.
You need a better tin foil hat though, mine was a modified baseball cap with a hand on top making a peace sign, but with the pull of a string would
make the index finger come down leaving the middle finger standing up. I wore it to every protest in Washington since 2001. It was lost on my last
arrest for trespassing on the capitol building
Your hat sounds epic!!! It is a shame you lost this treasure....somewhere someone has it and they are thinking "look at this artifact of great power
that I found".
Sorry, Mask will keep his Tin foil hat though...there were a few shapes and sizes we went for in designing his costume...but I eventually decided the
best was the "simplest".
Keep it simple stupid, is the best rule anyone ever taught me.
Rule #1 - don't do anything that will earn you an overnight stay in DC.
Can;t wait for the next edition. Keep up the great work brother!
Lol...I've had to spend a few nights in places I didn't enjoy either...I know what you mean there.
I will keep up the work, and with ATS' help, I hope to make everyone proud to say "that's our comic, and we are proud to see it on ATS".
If not...well, I guess I can make a comic about some guy bit by a spider or something...
It's good to see this evolving and starting to pick up some steam. As I did in your first thread when I first saw this, I still support it. I still
got some questions, like before, will he have a nemisis or sidekick? Will he/you be focusing on anything specific or just each rule gets it's own
little chapter? s+f for general effort and focus...
If it starts with a plane crash and a guy opening his eyes and ends with a plane taking off and the same guy closing his eyes, I'll set the leeches
I Will !!!
SIR! I promise this much it will not, and to assure you that further, a quick note on myself-
I decided to stop watching all media years ago. It was an experiment. But one I never fully accomplished since two TV shows remained in my life (and a
handful of movies). I didn't watch a single thing for years, but I just couldn't give up Dr Who and LOST.
Dr Who was with me since I was born, he saved more days then anyone, and he wouldn't leave me...so I couldn't leave him.
And LOST...when I quit TV, It was near the middle of season two, and I just loved the writing and since it had a foreseeable "end", I needed to know
the ending and decided to stick it out and allow myself "this pleasure" until the end. I was a fanboy indeed.
When ever I told someone "I do not watch TV", someone would always chime in with a snarky "yeah, cept for Who and LOST".
Let it be known that that show broke my heart worse then any girlfriend, backstabbing buddy could of. Oh man...what a kick in the....mother fudge.
So I promise, I know your pain...and I sympathize.
The story has a three step progression each step = 10 issues.
As Aristotle said-
A Beginning, a middle, an end. Each with its own purpose and part in the journey.
And the climactic ending will not be an eye closing sir! But I can't promise I'll still have you reading by then...at least LOST fooled us into
Hope to not fail you the same.
PS- To prove just how much I loved the show...heres a song from one of my projects (Project: The Ben Linus Album) soon to never be released in any
I never did like LOST. I only saw some of the first season about being bored stupid with flashbacks. I packed it in when the Iraqi guy obviously knew
how to torture the Han Solo guy which the nice ex-army Doctor guy organised and oversaw. Serious character flaw stuff there with the
But since we're having a social here - tell me about comics et al.
How is you favourite writer(s), artist(s) and colourist(s) and why.
What's your favourite comic (Only 1 choice here)?
Favourite stories overall?
If you answer right there's 3 black vans filled with prizes waiting for you!!!
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