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Originally posted by LadySkadi
My first in the Writing Forum.
Comments are welcome and much appreciated.
Originally posted by SLAYER69
Star and Flag.
You know this has to be about the best "First" attempt I've read in a while. Keep up the good work. Maybe someday soon we can collaborate on a short story.
Originally posted by ladyinwaiting
Good job LS!
Never have I felt such compassion for one of rodent friends.
Originally posted by antar
You are a true natural, interesting I too considered creating the story from the eye of an aquatic animal. Your story made me cry and I loved the twist of the little rat.
Originally posted by Wayne60
That was truly amazing.
Originally posted by SpartanKingLeonidas
reply to post by LadySkadi
You really capture the animals concern for life.
Something rare in humans, both for animals, and for other humans.
At least from the lessons I have learned, humans are heartless animals.
Reminded me mildy of Riki Tiki Tavi.
Originally posted by Izarith
What the hell is wrong with you.
That's the saddest thing I've ever read.
I loved it tho.
seriously tho, that was a really sad disturbing story. But beautifully written and lovely and so true. But sad...
But what happened to the rat? I don't care what you say THAT RAT LIVED HE LIVED!!!
*Izzy crumbles to the floor crying*
Originally posted by Ceriddwen
Excellent story and very moving!
Keep up the good work!
Originally posted by Alethea
Maybe we can all learn a lesson from the rat...... nobody is coming for us!
Waiting for a hero is "the strong delusion."