posted on Jun, 9 2010 @ 03:57 AM
Nice first video, some constructive critisism for the ladies:
Julie: Doing great, vocally you are very strong, good pace of words and little interruptions, a joy to listen too, however you move way to much while
you talk. I sense you are doing this to try and put more emphasise (spelling?) on your words, and while this is a good thing during a live
presentation, during a "news broadcast" it is not in my honest opinion. Its too busy and makes for an unpleasent viewing.
Ashley: Doing great as well, much steadier and calmer to watch, however the interruptions were putting me a bit off. Though this is fine in between
subjects, a nice steady pace would be better when staying on the same subject. though I can understand not having a prompter is what's causing this,
so no worries there.
As for the people complaining about that its a recap, for people like me that dont read everything on the site, due to time or not wanting to wade
through 20 pages with people posting one liners (Its getting really bad lately IMO) this is great, and I enjoyed it very much.