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posted on May, 25 2010 @ 07:23 PM

All dams of Heaven break through drifting Pleasure
Provoking hazy Pain played as a groovy Drown symphony
Of experience Inflicted by the drained maestro’s Muse
To claim the Blue throne like deep dark Green seaweed
Jaws of Damnation silvershark sharp and Swallow
Like black light Guiding the helplessly Blind
Within the sun’s storm of virtue upon Lord Blizzard
Through the snake’s Cunning bite to poison true Ignorance
Before it lasts for Eternity feasting on Famine

Dreadful wails echo from the Slutting shadowhordes at Lust
To drill without Mercy through the Art of corrupted fantasy
In the pit of Lecherous scum amidst myriad hunters of Good
Bestial justice cleanses the Facades of all Sins flushed
And the hall of ill-starred Fame is burned to ashes by Infamy
Greased with the Grotesque waxing empty Cold and dead
Dived beyond the Sunken shores of collapsed Time

Facing the palace of Horns like a plague in full Bloom
Graced with the Evil of the pentagram in Practice failed
To drink and spit the Salt of omnipotent Fate
Rubbing the Wounds of the Original truth at rest
Where the magic chambers Blaze with the Torture
Of past present and Future lives Mystically succumbed
Inhaling glowing Galactic snow in black like Angels of death
Only to exhale fire-breathing Demons hailing their WaterHell
Anchored by blessings in Disguise assaulted with waves of Vice

posted on May, 25 2010 @ 07:28 PM
Creative writing? There's a forum for that.
An explanation from you maybe?

posted on May, 26 2010 @ 03:53 AM
reply to post by Chamberf=6

I'm plumping for prophecy. Unlike creative writing, there is no requirement that prophecy have literary merit.

posted on May, 26 2010 @ 03:59 AM
reply to post by Astyanax

ouch, thats harsh, Astyanax.

I quite like it actually, although I would like to know why it was posted

posted on May, 26 2010 @ 04:35 AM
reply to post by monkofmimir

Dreadful wails echo from the Slutting shadowhordes at Lust

I rest my case.

posted on May, 26 2010 @ 05:26 PM
Perhaps wanted to flash my lifetime slaughterhouse art to the general public here ? It´s hard to pick up something good from my real piles of material I´ve flooded with over 9 000 readers in 14 countries. I´ve said it all.

posted on May, 26 2010 @ 05:34 PM
Actually, it´s like browsing through my own library or bookstore, where I´ve been mapping Heaven in Hell on Earth for the last 16 years. I don´t know what else to say. It´s all been written, to be discussed, I guess, even at universities, I used to spread the Sixth Gospel on an academic level, when I was an English and Spanish professor. They suspect it´s good stuff, however "weird or prophetic".

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