Man infinite, those poems are great, but are you allways so down? Can we request some poems about better things? Poems don't allways have to be 'dark' right?

Very good!

I like them. I think real art is when you can take pain, and then,

create something beautiful from it.

Originally posted by Nygdan
Man infinite, those poems are great, but are you allways so down? Can we request some poems about better things? Poems don't allways have to be 'dark' right?

ive tried, but there not as good,
so im sticking to my dark side, so to speak.

angel sinners,
sing to me,
they cover while i bleed,
i cant take the pain,
i cant hold the heart,
another night with you,
is something i cant do,
the world continues to cry,
sunlight starts to die,
my life is a mess,
and so is mother nature,

Touche me one last time,
break my heart for the final time,
make me bleed,
watch me die,
make me fall down and cry

Just read your poems. Kinda sad, I have to agree. I'm sorry you feel that way sometimes.

Your heart may be broken, but tell you what, brutha, you're brain is fully intact!!!

Very powerful and thought provoking~ You have a gift Infinite, and I thank you for sharing.

Originally posted by CelticMist
Very powerful and thought provoking~ You have a gift Infinite, and I thank you for sharing.

thank you so much, thanx for reading

Just read your poems. Kinda sad, I have to agree. I'm sorry you feel that way sometimes.

Your heart may be broken, but tell you what, brutha, you're brain is fully intact!!!

Thank you too, i wouldn't say my brain is that intelligent

Infinite, I have never seen anyone write or share so many poems at one time. You're poems truly express what your subconsious soul percieves this world to be. I feel for you, as I use to write nothing but "dark" poetry per say.

I have also experienced depression for many years. I do offer you a glimmer of hope as my depression has been lifted. I have been free of depression for 2 years now.

You are very brave and I commend you for sharing your feelings on ATS. I have only written a few poems lately. I am too scared to share my "dark" poetry. But after reading your poems I think I may just do that.

Thanks for the inspiration infinite. I look forward to your future work.

Originally posted by CPYKOmega
Infinite, I have never seen anyone write or share so many poems at one time. You're poems truly express what your subconsious soul percieves this world to be. I feel for you, as I use to write nothing but "dark" poetry per say.

I have also experienced depression for many years. I do offer you a glimmer of hope as my depression has been lifted. I have been free of depression for 2 years now.

You are very brave and I commend you for sharing your feelings on ATS. I have only written a few poems lately. I am too scared to share my "dark" poetry. But after reading your poems I think I may just do that.

Thanks for the inspiration infinite. I look forward to your future work.

thank you for taking the time to read my work,
i find it easy to touche into my dark side for ideas and work, it seems to bring out the best in me. I cannot write happy poems, i dunno why, dont get me wrong i have tried. I have tried writting love poems before but it didnt work and i couldnt find the words

Silence.
Broken.
Hold me as i die,
catch my final tears as i cry,
lie to the world that im not afraid
to bleed.
Watch me,
Hold me,
Dont let me die tonight,
Dont let me get out of your sight,

Your poems are very good Infinite, I liked them.

The "Fake smiles" really hit home for me.

There were some others that effected me in a similiar way, but I am not going to say which ones because that would say to much.


Your poetry is very heartfelt and powerful, some of them made me start to cry, which in itself is a very difficult thing to od.

I really liked the the poems. Well done.

Great poems!! You should publish them, you are talented!! Good luck in trying to get them published

Awsome poems infinite.
You have a real gift for writing them.

"Autumn bleeds"

I feel the pain of your dying love,
i let go the dove,
cutting my throat to spill my pain,
there is nothing left,
watch me go insane,

Life is a endless game of pain,
the plessure of death is so appealing,
that i cant stop bleeding,
these scars keep ripping open,
ive lost everything over nothing,
i need something,
someone.

The trees bleed my name,
and the roses cut into my pain,
there's so much to take,
and little to love,
life is just a fake..
i'll hold autumn as she bleeds.

"GREAT MATE"
See, i'm a poet and I dident know it

seriously though
I really like this one

"Fake smile"

I wake up everyday,
and put on my fake smile,
the inside is hurting,
the outside is lying,

Everyone is smiling,
happy as can be,
why can't i be them,
im tired of being me,

another day,
another smile,
the pain smiles away,
my sanity drifts away

When i go to sleep,
i put my smile away,
then tomorrow,
i'll put it on again.

It kinda reminds me of "Trent Reznor"

not I'm obsessed with trent or anything....erm ...oh..yes I am


sshhhhhhh.........

blame me again,
twist and tame the pain,
this painless world has more to gain,
im sick, broken and dead,
i still spit blood over what you said,

my vains bleed with your pain,
you ripped the heart right out of me,
you force me to bleed,
and drown in your apathy,
im just to broken and blind to see

"Princess"

My Princess is beautifully dressed,
far from a mess,
or anything less,
she walks with me and keeps me at best.

My Princess is always standing
by my side,
she never weeps or cries,
she's so strong inside.
she is my life.

Today, my princess has died,
ive fallen to my knees and cried
my princess has gone,
she's dried up and died.
her body a broken mess,
no one can replace my princess..

"R.I.P"

Blood drips and slow drains,
the endless apathic pain,
my life is ruined,
dead to all,
my heart bleeds poison,
in to the eyes of man,
i couldnt care at all,
i dont care how you feel,
i am no longer real,
i am dead to all.

ill rip your heart out,
before i cry,
i would rather watch you die,
then to love you again,
you gave me pain,
you gave me death,
ill kill you to kill the pain.

"Dear You......"

Im sorry for the why i am,
i tried to do the best i can,
wont you hold my hand
and catch my tears,
and take away all of my fears,
you mean so much to me,
you the drug that i need
to make be breathe,

im sorry for the the lies,
but maybe in a different life,
you could see my pain,
i wish i could just die tonight,
cause i cant see the end if sight,
i want to die,
i want to bleed,
i dont want to be anymore,
im just sorry,
so sorry,
for everything.

[edit on 20-7-2005 by infinite]