"I would...."

I would rather hurt myself and die,
then to ask why and say goodbye,
i couldnt bare to sit and cry,
ive been hurt along the way,
and i dont want to live another day,
these are my final days alive
and who gives a f$ck,
i've run out of luck,
i would rather die.

"Dark Night"

i lay back and start to cry,
i never understand why,
all i get is hate and backstab,
im the worse creation from God's Lab,
i have no family,
that was taken from me,
all i do is disappoint you,
and waste your time,
Tonight is the night where i die,

im gonna cut my wrists
and watch it bleed,
then see,
how much you love me,
i love you,
but i dont know if you do,

time to load the .22,
and put a bullet in for you,
i've got it against my head,
pulled the trigger,
Im Dead.

I thought that those last two were different. Different in a good way of course. I felt that "I would...." was more Emily Dickonsish, while "Dark Night" leaned a little to Poe. My favorite type of poetry was alway the ones of the dark variety. I do hope you post more, they weren't bad at all!

Originally posted by HALLOWEEN78
I thought that those last two were different. Different in a good way of course. I felt that "I would...." was more Emily Dickonsish, while "Dark Night" leaned a little to Poe. My favorite type of poetry was alway the ones of the dark variety. I do hope you post more, they weren't bad at all!

Thank you

I will be adding more to my work when i get the time to do it!

"The day....."

The day you walked into my life and stood by my side,
Is a day i will always remember by,
The sweet look in your eye,
The look of love and the look of happiness is what you brought to me,
You showed me how to be,
I never knew what love was until i meet you,

"Christmas time"

Christmas time,
where the lonely one dies
and never ask why,
Just understand life is hard
and i've tried,
Life is lie,
Thats why i must cry
to the God of nothing,
looking for that painful something,

Very nice, hope you have a mery Christmas!

Originally posted by SpittinCobra
Very nice, hope you have a mery Christmas!

Thank you,
Merry Christmas to you

random thoughts that came into my head. i had to let them out or ill go mad.......

What is left to loose,
nothing,
but there is something to know
and to hold,
but i dont know,

i wish i could smile,
nothing can do that,
i want to burn wild,
and fall down to the world
that killed me,
let my blood burn into this
world,

i want the world to feel my pain,
i want to be embraced
and be slain,
i will still live to that day,

i know it hurts to see me cry,
but this is why i want to die,
slash my wrists and let me be,
cause i dont want to be me,

infinite, your words are beautiful.

Have you considered publishing a book?

Originally posted by MacKiller
infinite, your words are beautiful.

Have you considered publishing a book?

lots of times,
but i have no idea where to start or how to

I guess starting is the hard part.

Just look for a local publisher, and show them your stuff

Originally posted by MacKiller
I guess starting is the hard part.

Just look for a local publisher, and show them your stuff

EXCUSE ME lol
When you say "stuff" i hope you mean my poems

Well, yeah.

well done, infinite. i'm impressed. not only is your intelligence at high standards but your heart seems to be in the same place. please post more.

I guess you like his 'stuff' too...

yeah i do. infinite had to have gone through a lot of suffering to write poems as meanigful as these. and i'm not even a big fan of poetry and i like it.

"Make me bleed"

i close my eyes,
to blind myself from the world,
cause when i start to ask why,
i fail to cry,
and blood tears spill into my dreams,

The insanity of my sanity,
has driven me to a grave of apathy,
i pave the way to a forgotton grave
where dreams and hopes turned me into a mute slave,

The sin of a curse has only got worse,
the dream, the pain, the hurt, the curse,
its all the same,
life is a restrictid game,

Originally posted by MacKiller
Have you considered publishing a book?

Go for it Infinite, the best poems come from the heart, which in my opinion yours do

[edit on 19-1-2005 by UK Wizard]

Of course, we all get a free copy...