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Infinite's tears (My life in Poems)

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posted on Jul, 27 2004 @ 06:17 PM
Wow there great! thank you for sharing so many of them with us,

They are very deep, well wrote,

Again thank you for sharing them.

posted on Jul, 27 2004 @ 07:00 PM
Thank you all for the kind words.

This next one really has knock the wind out of me. This is the only poem that i have reffered to myself in it, i mention my name (Dani) at the end of it, it hurt a lot writting this one.


Twisted and torn,
Raped and broken,
I lay here in vein,
screaming over this pain,
You ever been scared to dream at night,
never knowing what will appear in your sight,
The winters rain will always fall,
Dripping with the blood of my forgotten life

Stalked by flashbacks about childhood times,
And everytime i fall and die,
Seeing family use and abuse me,
Brother why,
Father why,
Mother why,
I was only a child and you tore me apart,
You've left me with a broken heart,
I am ripped, torn, raped and scorn,

My scars tell a thousands words,
Spilt blood has helped me to learn,
No matter who becomes my Mannequin,
No one will ever love Dani

posted on Jul, 27 2004 @ 07:27 PM
Geeze im kinda not sure what to say here to be honest,

You are very brave for sharing that with us, and i have alot of respect for you in doing so,

Thank you so much for sharing that with us, i imagin it must of been hard for you to write,


posted on Jul, 27 2004 @ 07:33 PM
Wow. it must have been hard to write infinite

Its well written and is one of those pieces of art which people can go back on and that has meaning and that makes a difference

thanks for sharing


posted on Jul, 28 2004 @ 11:58 AM
Thank you all for commenting, means a lot to me.
I have more which are in the work and i will post them soon.

Thank you again

posted on Jul, 28 2004 @ 12:03 PM
keep them coming infinite, writing poetry is definitely a worthwhile outlet for your emotions, your words speak alot and i continue to enjoy and be touched your poems.

posted on Jul, 28 2004 @ 04:15 PM

So hard to breathe,
It hurts to think,
That love can heal my pain,
I fall more insane,
Life is just a sadistic game
Of endless pain,

So hard to dream,
It hurts to sleep,
All i see is my beaten self,
Laying in a pool of broken memories,
The voices come and call me,
Your nothing,
They say,
Your a failure,
They say,
Your nothing...

Feeling like nothing,
Is my only something
In Life,
Take the knife,
and stay clear of the fear

One day someone will come,
And take this fear away,
I'll sit here waiting for that day.

posted on Jul, 28 2004 @ 04:54 PM
Good poems Infinite,

Keep up with the good work they truely feel as if they have come from the soul see you around the site and in ats chat.

posted on Jul, 28 2004 @ 05:08 PM
OMG, they were soo awesome. they touched me soo deep, I was depressed for 4 years, "Dear God" got me right down in the gut.
"Fake Smile" that poem expressed how i feel, but i could never put them in correct words, you did it soo beautifully.
"So Sick" you are such a awesome writer, keep writing

posted on Jul, 29 2004 @ 02:59 PM

Lets play a game,
but don't tell anyone the name,
Got it?,
You can trust me,
Im your Brother see,
Don't worry,
And Don't tell mummy,

what you doing,
Its hurting me,
Can't you see,
Your hurting me,
Brother please,
Make is stop,

I've never forgot,
you did,
but i never forgot,
I hate you,
I hate you,
I hate you,
I hate you,
I hate you,
I hate you,
To my brother,
I hate you,

[edit on 1-8-2004 by infinite]

posted on Jul, 29 2004 @ 03:03 PM
the fake smile one,is my favorite. Im not depress but trust me my fake smile is always with me! thanks for sharing

posted on Aug, 1 2004 @ 05:22 PM

Burned by Apathy,
Raped by fear,
You stole my faith,
Shed my tears,
All i ever did was love you.

Broken and forgotten,
Never to return,
You pictures will forever burn,
In my memories,
You took the love,
And gave the Pain.

Im just a mistake,
thats what you always say,
Your a mistake,
Your a mistake,
Your a mistake,
Your a mistake,
Why does my life feel so tainted
and fake.

posted on Aug, 1 2004 @ 05:43 PM
This is abit different from the others, well sort of. Just trying something new. Hope you like it. Its not one of my bests, but its ok.

"March 7th"

You held my hand,
And kissed me softly,
Like a medieval fantasy,
But thats when the dream
began to fade,
All i feel is this pain,

You said you had to go,
And i couldn't come,
You said it had to be this way,
Now i look at world that has taken
you from me,
I hate the world for taking
You from Me.

Im so alone,
Why did you leave,
Im so alone,
I can't breathe,
I hate the world for taking
You from Me.

March 7th will never die,
Some many nights i've cried,
Why does love burn,
I can't live without you,
Impossible to breathe,
I hate the world for taking
You from Me.

posted on Aug, 1 2004 @ 05:45 PM
Thats a really good collection of poems you have infinite

all very touching and fantastic rhyme skill

very good stuff and keep it up


posted on Aug, 2 2004 @ 12:58 PM

Do you pray,
Do you sing,
Will you take away
My pain,
Its the same old words,
Lost for directions,
Always taking the wrong turns,

Your nothing to me,
I know what you want,
And who you want to be,
I may be blinded by you,
But i can see right through you.

posted on Aug, 2 2004 @ 05:37 PM
"I want to die"

I want to lay down and cry,
Then burn up and die,
I hate this life,
The only joy is slashing
myself with a knife.

Nothing is good,
Everything is bad,
Ain't life so sad,
I want to die,
I want to die,
I want to die,
I want to die,

Nothing is worth living for,
Not even you,
I hate this life,
I want to die

posted on Aug, 2 2004 @ 05:46 PM
I see you are enloved or I am mistaken and your love is bitter sweet right?

Poems is a good way to empty an achy heart

posted on Aug, 3 2004 @ 10:12 AM
"The Rain"

Bitter sweet summer rain,
Always falls and brings the pain,
The rains falls down,
And always will,
My sanity seeps into the ground,

Sometimes i feel like my father,
I don't want care,bother or look after
Myself or my health,
See and taste my tragedy,

I've drank and tasted the sacred blood,
And ate the dove of love,
It burned,
It hurt,
Life only got worse,
I've loved, burned and screamed the curse,
There is no heart,
Just a place where the lifes been burned apart,

The rain falls on the world that taken the life from me,
The life bleeds from me,
Wipe your eyes and never cry,
Everyone has to die.

posted on Aug, 3 2004 @ 07:21 PM
infinite that is deep, very creative to. you have a lot of talent.

posted on Aug, 5 2004 @ 02:35 PM
Good work, my friend! Keep it up, they keep getting better and better. I like to write as well, but as was stated earlier, I probably wouldn't have the testicular fortitude to put myself out there like that. Maybe someday. In the meantime, keep writing, you definitely have talent!

U2U me if you would like to read some of my work.

Adios amigo

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