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Sailor's Fate

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posted on Apr, 17 2010 @ 05:21 PM
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rocking gently
clear and blue
calling its song
the ocean charms us all

its siren song
calling sailors
two ships depart
two parts unknowen

sailing on and sailing forth
the ships spy yonder
a storm
Quickly, the captains call
Run below the deck!

but alas, the tempest's fury
is too great for one ship
Phoebus' arrows claim the crew
the ship sinks swiftly below
into Poseidon's kingdom

on sails the other
mourning its poor sister,
but from lamenting springs no good
For Fate ends us all.




posted on Apr, 17 2010 @ 05:23 PM
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Loved it!
Thank you...



posted on Apr, 17 2010 @ 05:29 PM
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you're welcome
i wasn't too confident in my poetic skills but thank you for showing i can be a poet. shows you what you can do when totally bored with an idle mind.



posted on Apr, 17 2010 @ 05:39 PM
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Originally posted by LocoHombre
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you're welcome
i wasn't too confident in my poetic skills but thank you for showing i can be a poet. shows you what you can do when totally bored with an idle mind.

you did just fine..keep it up!




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