I’m only four

The kitty, she paws at Raggedy Ann’s red woolly hair, I giggle and realize I shouldn’t be here; Miss Sally will find me and scream in my ear, I run to the door but she isn’t there, skipping back to the window I sit down on the floor, Miss Sally, she blames me, for it all, I don’t know why, I’m only four.
Do you like my new pinafore? Someone made it for me, for our special day out, I don’t know what she looked like, but I think she was nice.
See that place over there the latch in the wall, I go there with kitty when I hear Miss Sally call.
Miss Sally she scares me, I was just chasing kitty in here is all, trying to catch her when I heard the roar. Miss Sally was screaming, I think she got hurt.
I play here all day with kitty and Ann. I just watch and make sure Miss Sally’s not around.
Look down in this hole, there is a room down there, I sometimes look down it, but its just black and broken, there’s nothing there. There are stairs to get down there, ill show if you like, we must make sure Miss Sally isn’t there, and that she’s not in sight. See that way? There...past that door? The stairs catch on fire and kitty and me, we won’t go there anymore, that’s where Miss Sally stays, she likes it there. She runs through the halls shouting and making me scared.
Oops my hem is on fire again; see, I just brush it out.
Shh she is coming we must hide in the wall, come kitty we must sit quiet n all.


1920’s Country News clipping, headline reads: Fire leaves many out of work.

Yesterday’s fire at the nearby Mill has left many without work.
Workers from the mill were caught off guard as smoke billowed from an unmanned machine located on the factories ground floor.
No accusations of arson have arisen as such and local authorities are still investigating as to whether or not the two that are missing were actually inside the building at the time.
Witness said that the school mistress and one of her pupils had been heard on the upper level at the time of the explosion, but due to the panic and fluster of those interviewed one cannot be sure.
The School had organized with the factories owner for its annual day trip. The class consisting of twelve pupils aged between four and nine. In a statement by one of the children’s father, he said that it was common for teachers to take the children out of the classroom and into the real world, so they could learn what was to be expected of them in the future.
Mr. Miller. The factories owner, said he wasn’t sure when workers would be back on the job, let’s wait for the insurance people to finish there review first shall we.
Officials agree that Mr. Miller has been currently looking at real-estate abroad and that this incident has nothing what’s so ever to do with that.


Hope you enjoyed my first little ghost story. All content is fiction including the news article. Enjoy and please excuse my grammar and punctuation as this is my first story I have ever written.
insperation came from this photo

Nice one.
I enjoyed it.
I was a bit disappointed when it ended, but that was only because it ended too soon. I would have liked it to have been longer.
Thanks.
Looking forward to your next one.

I am defiantly not clamering for any attention, if that is what you are implying.

No the person means it's good to read and you can not put it down or stop reading; it is clamoring for our attention. Nothing else matters but reading and seeing where it goes, or in your case writing. Nothing else will pull you away from writing; the story is clamoring for your attention. "write me! Write me! Don't do anything else but write (or read) me"

that's what they meant.

Hi Whateva - I enjoyed your story very much. I even read it twice just for the enjoyment of it. I'm sure you will write longer ones and I look forward to reading them.