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Renewal (poem)

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posted on Jan, 4 2010 @ 11:59 PM
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I stare out my window
at the gray of the world outside
dead looking trees. . . arms outstretched
begging again for pride

Grass once green and lively
now as gray as the sky
crunches under foot
after the coldness of the night

Eight degrees this morning
is what the weatherman said
you'll need coat and gloves today
and warm cap for your head

Winter time depresses me
but a bird song on the wind
reminds me very sweetly
that spring will come again

The flowers with leaf and blossom
will sway once more in the breeze
and be thankful for the shade again
provided by the trees

The warm sun will kiss my skin
giving it a golden glow
the grass will thicken green and plush
and I'll feel the need to mow

Winter is temporary
and for this I am glad
for the grayness of the season
makes my spirit sad

Bring on the March winds
let the April showers pour
the beauty of renewal
makes my spirit soar




posted on Jan, 11 2010 @ 12:53 AM
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Originally posted by Greenize
I stare out my window
at the gray of the world outside
dead looking trees. . . arms outstretched
begging again for pride

Grass once green and lively
now as gray as the sky
crunches under foot
after the coldness of the night

Eight degrees this morning
is what the weatherman said
you'll need coat and gloves today
and warm cap for your head

Winter time depresses me
but a bird song on the wind
reminds me very sweetly
that spring will come again

The flowers with leaf and blossom
will sway once more in the breeze
and be thankful for the shade again
provided by the trees

The warm sun will kiss my skin
giving it a golden glow
the grass will thicken green and plush
and I'll feel the need to mow

Winter is temporary
and for this I am glad
for the grayness of the season
makes my spirit sad

Bring on the March winds
let the April showers pour
the beauty of renewal
makes my spirit soar


ignoring the elegance of timing, and delivery, the beauty of tactics and timing allows for a slight injection ~ winter reminds me of snow!

you know what snow reminds me of? ask me, and i'll tell you!

;D

aaaaaah, it sure is quiet here! I hope you had a wonderful day today, and thank you for sharing yourself here in the forums. it was like, listening to a piano...



posted on Jan, 11 2010 @ 01:43 AM
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Winter time depresses me
but a bird song on the wind
reminds me very sweetly
that spring will come again

~ Nice - thanks for sharing your mind and heart.



posted on Jan, 11 2010 @ 02:13 AM
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very very pretty, and brings a better perspective than I had to our winter season here. Thank you.

starred and flagged.




posted on Jan, 11 2010 @ 02:40 PM
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Originally posted by Greenize
I stare out my window
at the gray of the world outside
dead looking trees. . . arms outstretched
begging again for pride

Grass once green and lively
now as gray as the sky
crunches under foot
after the coldness of the night

Eight degrees this morning
is what the weatherman said
you'll need coat and gloves today
and warm cap for your head

Winter time depresses me
but a bird song on the wind
reminds me very sweetly
that spring will come again

The flowers with leaf and blossom
will sway once more in the breeze
and be thankful for the shade again
provided by the trees

The warm sun will kiss my skin
giving it a golden glow
the grass will thicken green and plush
and I'll feel the need to mow

Winter is temporary
and for this I am glad
for the grayness of the season
makes my spirit sad

Bring on the March winds
let the April showers pour
the beauty of renewal
makes my spirit soar


just a goose bump in the day ~ and a wish ~ snow ~ beautiful - quiet

like a good man, who knows when to shut his ******* mouth!



posted on Jan, 13 2010 @ 11:53 PM
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Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I appreciate it! I would love to know what snow reminds you of....



posted on Jan, 14 2010 @ 12:27 AM
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Originally posted by Greenize
reply to post by EnemyCombatant74
 


Thank you for taking the time to read and comment! I appreciate it! I would love to know what snow reminds you of....


right...sometimes, you ignore the tactics and timing of delivery, sometimes, you let someone answer a question before giving the answer!

;D

keep up the writing!



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